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Q: Electronic voting has been highly controversial in the world. Some nations are considering the implementation of electronic voting system while many nations are concerned about the unpleasant ramifications of electronic voting. This essay describes that the drawbacks or hindrances of implementing electronic voting far outweigh the benefits for the following three reasons.

To begin with, introducing Internet voting system is very costly to build and maintain.
Despite the fact that labor costs, such as organizing an election or counting ballots, can be cut, it cannot be denied that initial costs and maintenance fees for the system, which will be paid from tax.

Another downside of voting over the internet is that electoral malpractice is likely to burgeon.
For example, radical political groups may intimidate electorate to vote for a certain political party or illegally buy other people’s right to vote in order to let it win. This kinds of fraud will undermine the foundation of democracy.


Last not but least, system glitch or failure are inevitable if governments introduce electronic voting. Also, computer viruses that stop the system and the act of hacking that, even more badly, manipulate the election result are significant threats. Being unable to ensure the safety of election, electronic voting should not be promoted.

To sum up, electronic voting should not be promoted because of poor cost-effectiveness, threat to democracy, and inevitable system failures.
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A: × Electronic voting has been highly controversial in the world.
✓ Electronic voting has been a highly controversial topic in the world as of late.

× Some nations are considering the implementation of electronic voting system while many nations are concerned about the unpleasant ramifications of electronic voting.
✓ Some nations are considering implementing an electronic voting system while many nations are concerned about the unpleasant ramifications of electronic voting.

× This essay describes that the drawbacks or hindrances of implementing electronic voting far outweigh the benefits for the following three reasons.
✓ Through three clauses, this essay describes the drawbacks of implementing electronic voting and how they outweigh the benefits.

× To begin with, introducing Internet voting system is very costly to build and maintain.
✓ To begin, introducing an internet voting system is very costly to build and maintain.

× Despite the fact that labor costs, such as organizing an election or counting ballots, can be cut, it cannot be denied that initial costs and maintenance fees for the system, which will be paid from tax.
✓ Despite the fact that labor costs (e.g. organizing an election or counting ballots) can be cut, it cannot be denied that initial costs and maintenance fees for the system would be paid by taxpayers.

× Another downside of voting over the internet is that electoral malpractice is likely to burgeon.
✓ Another downside of online voting is that electoral malpractice is more likely to occur.

× For example, radical political groups may intimidate electorate to vote for a certain political party or illegally buy other people’s right to vote in order to let it win.
✓ For example, radical political groups may intimidate the electorate to vote for a certain political party or illegally buy other people’s right to vote in order for their party to succeed.

× This kinds of fraud will undermine the foundation of democracy.
✓ This kind of fraud can compromise the foundation of democracy.

× Last not but least, system glitch or failure are inevitable if governments introduce electronic voting.
✓ Last not but least, system glitches and failure are nearly inevitable if governments introduce electronic voting.

× Also, computer viruses that stop the system and the act of hacking that, even more badly, manipulate the election result are significant threats.
✓ Other significant threats would be computer viruses and hacking, which can stop these hypothetical systems and aid in manipulating election results.

× Being unable to ensure the safety of election, electronic voting should not be promoted.
✓ Because of its inability to ensure election safety, electronic voting should not be promoted.

× To sum up, electronic voting should not be promoted because of poor cost-effectiveness, threat to democracy, and inevitable system failures.
✓ In conclusion, electronic voting should not be promoted because of poor cost-effectiveness, threat to democracy, and inevitable system failures.

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