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This is a story when I visited in Europe a few years ago. I went to the Vinena with my cousin who is a Canadian. I am not good at English speaking now, even worse at that time. I faced a begger on a street. He asked me giving some money, but I did not have enough money for our trip. So I had to refuse his asking, simply using the sentence "I have no money". Unfortunately, I could not remember that short sentence. So I told him like this with nervious,
"I am poor!"
At the moment, my cousin started to laugh and teased throughout our trip.
klingt das natürlich?
This is a story when I visited in Europe a few years ago. I went to the Vinena with my cousin who is a Canadian. I am not good at English speaking now, even worse at that time. I faced a begger on a street. He asked me giving some money, but I did not have enough money for our trip. So I had to refuse his asking, simply using the sentence "I have no money". Unfortunately, I could not remember that short sentence. So I told him like this with nervious,
"I am poor!"
At the moment, my cousin started to laugh and teased throughout our trip.
klingt das natürlich?
"I am poor!"
At the moment, my cousin started to laugh and teased throughout our trip.
klingt das natürlich?
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Etwas unnatürlich
This is a story about when I visited Europe a few years ago. I went to Vienna with my cousin, who is Canadian. I am not good at speaking English now, but I was even worse at that time. I met a beggar on a street. He asked me for some money, but I did not have any money to spare. So I had to refuse him, wanting to say, "I have no money". Unfortunately, I could not remember that short sentence, so I nervously told him, "I am poor!"
At that moment, my cousin started to laugh, and he teased me about this throughout our trip.
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- Englisch (US)
Etwas unnatürlich
This is a story about when I visited Europe a few years ago. I went to Vienna with my cousin, who is Canadian. I am not good at speaking English now, but I was even worse at that time. I met a beggar on a street. He asked me for some money, but I did not have any money to spare. So I had to refuse him, wanting to say, "I have no money". Unfortunately, I could not remember that short sentence, so I nervously told him, "I am poor!"
At that moment, my cousin started to laugh, and he teased me about this throughout our trip.
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Unnatürlich
People can understand you, but it is not natural.
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@MetRon thanks!
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@bbardeo Thank you. It is just as well that you can understand my story.
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Unnatürlich
Yes! That is the most important thing.
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Etwas unnatürlich
This is a story about my visit to Europe a few years ago. I went to Vinena with my cousin, who is Canadian. I am not good at English, but I was even worse at the time. I saw a begger on the street. He asked me for some money, but I did not even have enough money for our trip.
I wanted to refuse him, simply saying, "I have no money." Unfortunately, I could not remember that simple sentence, so I nervously said, "I am poor!" At that moment, my cousin laughed. He teased me about it for the rest of our trip.
Just a note about punctuation. You should put a comma before a sentence in quotations, and when you have a full sentence inside of quotations, the period should be before the end quote. And you don't need a new line in some of the places where you put one.
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@chello Thank you for your sincere comments :D
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