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kiepo
11 Nov 2018

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This is my friend, Miki Yokotani. Her favorite subject is Music. I liked music, and she did a piano since it was small and touched the music a lot when I belonged to the brass band club at the age of a junior high school and did a horn.
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soulfulsound
11 Nov 2018

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This was very confusing to understand because you often wrote, "I" but I think you meant "She" in writing about your friend, Miki.

"‎This is my friend, Miki Yokotani. Her favorite subject is Music. SHE likeS music, and HAS PLAYED piano since SHE was small. SHE PLAYED MUSIC A LOT TOO WHEN SHE belonged to the brass band club DURING junior high school, PLAYING THE HORN."

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This is my friend, Miki Yokotani. Her favorite subject is Music. I liked music, and she did a piano since it was small and touched the music a lot when I belonged to the brass band club at the age of a junior high school and did a horn. 添削お願いします
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