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Most of the restrooms are often all occupied in the mall. I think they should build a lot more toilets. klingt das natürlich?
Most of the restrooms are often all occupied in the mall. I think they should build a lot more toilets. klingt das natürlich?
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- Englisch (US)
- Indonesisch
Etwas unnatürlich
Most of the restrooms at the mall are often all occupied. I think they should build more toilets (or stalls).
- Englisch (US)
- Französisch (Kanada)
Etwas unnatürlich
I think saying "most" and then "all" sounds a little odd. If you remove the word "all", I think it would sound more natural.
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- Französisch (Frankreich)
- Rumänisch
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tlemaire is right. Avoid repeating frequency words. Also avoid repeating the word "toilet" and it's synonyms. It's probably safe to say, avoid repeating almost anything.
See what I did? *For emphasis*, I repeated the *whole sentence*. But not words *inside* the sentence.
Other than that sounds good.
And congrats for your hard work, nobu_in_japan !
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