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We are against the corporal punishment of children.
If someone punishes children physically, they will not learn from their mistakes. They pretend to reflect their actions, as they are afraid of being hit. klingt das natürlich?
We are against the corporal punishment of children.
If someone punishes children physically, they will not learn from their mistakes. They pretend to reflect their actions, as they are afraid of being hit. klingt das natürlich?
If someone punishes children physically, they will not learn from their mistakes. They pretend to reflect their actions, as they are afraid of being hit. klingt das natürlich?
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We are against the corporal punishment of children.
If a child is physically punished, they will not learn from their mistakes. They pretend to reflect their actions just because they’re afraid of being hit.
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Thank you for your answers.
I am very confused.
Please let me know more...
I am very confused.
Please let me know more...
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Etwas unnatürlich
We are against the corporal punishment of children.
If someone punishes their children physically, the children will not learn from their mistakes. They will only pretend to reflect on their actions, as they are afraid of being hit.
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@mihoppy Hi, "We are against the corporal punishment of children" is good. However, in the sentence "if someone punishes children physically, they will not learn from their mistakes" the person who is not learning from their mistakes could be the Parent. Therefore, you would need to say "the children will not learn from their mistakes".
Also, you have to clarify at the start of that sentence and say "If someone punishes their children physically" not "if someone punishes children physically" as that is referring to all children, not just the children of that parent.
Finally, "They pretend to reflect their actions", should be "they (will only) pretend to reflect (on) their actions" otherwise it does not make sense. Make sure to remember to put "only" as you are comparing two outcomes.
Otherwise, it sounds pretty good. This sentence is not bad, just could be slightly better. Well done.
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We are against the corporal punishment of children.
If someone physically punishes children, the children will not learn from their mistakes. Instead, they would pretend to reflect upon their actions because they are afraid of being hit.
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Thank you for your answer.
I will tell them to an interviewer who is a teacher.
I would like to say all adult (teachers,parents etc...)shouldn’t inflict corporal punishment on all children(students,someone’s child etc...)
I will tell them to an interviewer who is a teacher.
I would like to say all adult (teachers,parents etc...)shouldn’t inflict corporal punishment on all children(students,someone’s child etc...)
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@565char Thanks for helping me. You gave me lots of advice! I understand.
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