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Nov.30(wed)
I went to go eat dinner together with my friends of the seminer in a while.Finding employment was finally decided on the last one of us,and we praised his success.After having eaten dinner,we played bowling.We were devided into two teams by two wins one defeat.One of my friends gave four times of strikes consecutively,and I was surprised.It was a very fun day today.
I think my sentences don't flow as smoothly and I made some mistakes.
please tell me appropriate expression.
Nov.30(wed)
I went to go eat dinner together with my friends of the seminer in a while.Finding employment was finally decided on the last one of us,and we praised his success.After having eaten dinner,we played bowling.We were devided into two teams by two wins one defeat.One of my friends gave four times of strikes consecutively,and I was surprised.It was a very fun day today.
I think my sentences don't flow as smoothly and I made some mistakes.
please tell me appropriate expression.
I went to go eat dinner together with my friends of the seminer in a while.Finding employment was finally decided on the last one of us,and we praised his success.After having eaten dinner,we played bowling.We were devided into two teams by two wins one defeat.One of my friends gave four times of strikes consecutively,and I was surprised.It was a very fun day today.
I think my sentences don't flow as smoothly and I made some mistakes.
please tell me appropriate expression.
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I went to go eat dinner with my friends from the seminar for a while. The only person out of this group that hadn't been employed now is; we praised his success. After having eaten dinner, we went to go bowling. We divided each other into two teams. My friend had four consecutive strikes. I was very surprised by it. Overall, it was a very fun day today.
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@takuya111 I would write:
Nov 30th (Wed)
I went to eat dinner together with my friends from a seminer.
The final one of our friends finally decided where he is going to work. We celebrated and praised his success in finding work.
After having eaten dinner, we went bowling.
We were divided into two teams by two wins and one defeat.
One of my friends bowled four consecutive strikes, I was surprised.
It was a fun day today.
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