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Englisch (UK)
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Englisch (US)
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Vereinfachtes Chinesisch (China)
Frage über Englisch (UK)
ciao a tutti, ho scritto correttamente?
SHORT STORY:
For me, the last year was very challenging.
in addition to attending the university in Bologna and work for a pizzeria in Modena, I was becoming to teach Latin American dance. precisely salsa dancing.
I was starting to teach it approximately in October, in Frozen Latino in Modena from 9:00 pm to 10:30 pm.
I was going there for watch the newa lessons of my former dancing teacher, when unexpectedly he was proposing me to become his dancer for there year. We were starting immediately the lessons and we were creating a beautiful group of Latin dancers.
From February we were starting to prepare a dance show, so my teaching over to Monday dealt me even on a Wednesday night, from 8:30 pm to 10:30 pm. Initially it was quite difficult, because on Wednesday I was only with twenty students to manage, but gradually, with their collaboration it was becoming more easy and enjoyable.
In June we were taking the dresses for the show. the show was being in 27th June.
There evening, all we were quite nervous because there was the first show for they. The exhibition was going perfectly and our show was wanted in more Latin American clubbing.
ciao a tutti, ho scritto correttamente?
SHORT STORY:
For me, the last year was very challenging.
in addition to attending the university in Bologna and work for a pizzeria in Modena, I was becoming to teach Latin American dance. precisely salsa dancing.
I was starting to teach it approximately in October, in Frozen Latino in Modena from 9:00 pm to 10:30 pm.
I was going there for watch the newa lessons of my former dancing teacher, when unexpectedly he was proposing me to become his dancer for there year. We were starting immediately the lessons and we were creating a beautiful group of Latin dancers.
From February we were starting to prepare a dance show, so my teaching over to Monday dealt me even on a Wednesday night, from 8:30 pm to 10:30 pm. Initially it was quite difficult, because on Wednesday I was only with twenty students to manage, but gradually, with their collaboration it was becoming more easy and enjoyable.
In June we were taking the dresses for the show. the show was being in 27th June.
There evening, all we were quite nervous because there was the first show for they. The exhibition was going perfectly and our show was wanted in more Latin American clubbing.
SHORT STORY:
For me, the last year was very challenging.
in addition to attending the university in Bologna and work for a pizzeria in Modena, I was becoming to teach Latin American dance. precisely salsa dancing.
I was starting to teach it approximately in October, in Frozen Latino in Modena from 9:00 pm to 10:30 pm.
I was going there for watch the newa lessons of my former dancing teacher, when unexpectedly he was proposing me to become his dancer for there year. We were starting immediately the lessons and we were creating a beautiful group of Latin dancers.
From February we were starting to prepare a dance show, so my teaching over to Monday dealt me even on a Wednesday night, from 8:30 pm to 10:30 pm. Initially it was quite difficult, because on Wednesday I was only with twenty students to manage, but gradually, with their collaboration it was becoming more easy and enjoyable.
In June we were taking the dresses for the show. the show was being in 27th June.
There evening, all we were quite nervous because there was the first show for they. The exhibition was going perfectly and our show was wanted in more Latin American clubbing.
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- Italienisch
*and working for a
*I started teaching
*more precisely salsa
*I started giving lessons approximately
*in Frozen Latino --> ???
*while I was there to watch
*he unexpectedly proposed me to become one of his dancers
*we immediately started
*we created
*we started to put together a dance show
*so my teacher... etc --> questa parte non l'ho capita
*on Wednesday I had to manage 20 students all by myself
*it became easier and more enjoyable for everybody
*In June we bought(?)
*the show was on the 27th of June
*That evening
*we were all quite nervous
*because it was our first show
*everything went smoothly
*and our show was even requested(?) in other L.A. clubs
- Spanisch (Mexiko)
Ciao! Possiamo parlare in chat? Io sono anche latino e andrò in Italia :D

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