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13 Sep 2019
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Are these correct?
- I am a very diligent and passionate person. I have strong personal communication skills, because I can speak good English. And also, I am a consistent honor student from pre-school.
- I had an average of 94%, with honors, during Senior High School. I was awarded as Best in Reading and Writing Skills and Best in Oral Communication. I had a score of 9 out of 10 in my IELTS examination.
- I was the former president of Supreme Student Parliament S.Y. 2018-2019 in my previous school. I was also part of English Club for the Youth.
This is for my creative resume.
Are these correct?
- I am a very diligent and passionate person. I have strong personal communication skills, because I can speak good English. And also, I am a consistent honor student from pre-school.
- I had an average of 94%, with honors, during Senior High School. I was awarded as Best in Reading and Writing Skills and Best in Oral Communication. I had a score of 9 out of 10 in my IELTS examination.
- I was the former president of Supreme Student Parliament S.Y. 2018-2019 in my previous school. I was also part of English Club for the Youth.
This is for my creative resume.
- I am a very diligent and passionate person. I have strong personal communication skills, because I can speak good English. And also, I am a consistent honor student from pre-school.
- I had an average of 94%, with honors, during Senior High School. I was awarded as Best in Reading and Writing Skills and Best in Oral Communication. I had a score of 9 out of 10 in my IELTS examination.
- I was the former president of Supreme Student Parliament S.Y. 2018-2019 in my previous school. I was also part of English Club for the Youth.
This is for my creative resume.
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- Englisch (UK)
I would change ‘because I can speak good English’ to ‘as I am proficient in English.’
I’d also change ‘And also, I am a consistent honor student from pre-school’ to ‘I have also been an honour student consistently since pre-school.’ Pre-school is typically used in America though, so I’d change that to ‘Kindergarten.’
Honour is spelt with a ‘u’ in UK English.
I would remove ‘as’ from ‘I was awarded as Best in Reading and Writing Skills.’
Besides from that, everything sounds great!
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