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I write an essay every day, but I'm not sure my Engsish is correct or not.
Could you check it and please let me know if there are any mistakes?
Thank you.
The hardest goodbye I ever had is in Cambodia. Three years ago, I went to Cambodia to teach Engsih and Japanese. It was my first time visiting other countries alone, so I was worried about everything like the fight and the life there. Actually, the life in there was totally different compared to Japan. I did Homestay, so I stayed at the resident's house. It didn't have any electric equipments and faucets. When I washed clothes, I had to use well water. I couldn't believe the situation because I never used well water in Japan. It was a little bit hard to live there. However, the residents were very kind and friendly, even though I was a stranger. I didn't understand the language spoken in Cambodia, but they accepted me. I learned that the languages didn't matter to connect people from other countries. The best thing was heart. When I had to say goodbye, every memory I experienced there was flashbacks, then I didn't want to leave. It has been a while since I visited there. When I have time. I would like to go there to meet them.
I write an essay every day, but I'm not sure my Engsish is correct or not.
Could you check it and please let me know if there are any mistakes?
Thank you.
The hardest goodbye I ever had is in Cambodia. Three years ago, I went to Cambodia to teach Engsih and Japanese. It was my first time visiting other countries alone, so I was worried about everything like the fight and the life there. Actually, the life in there was totally different compared to Japan. I did Homestay, so I stayed at the resident's house. It didn't have any electric equipments and faucets. When I washed clothes, I had to use well water. I couldn't believe the situation because I never used well water in Japan. It was a little bit hard to live there. However, the residents were very kind and friendly, even though I was a stranger. I didn't understand the language spoken in Cambodia, but they accepted me. I learned that the languages didn't matter to connect people from other countries. The best thing was heart. When I had to say goodbye, every memory I experienced there was flashbacks, then I didn't want to leave. It has been a while since I visited there. When I have time. I would like to go there to meet them.
Could you check it and please let me know if there are any mistakes?
Thank you.
The hardest goodbye I ever had is in Cambodia. Three years ago, I went to Cambodia to teach Engsih and Japanese. It was my first time visiting other countries alone, so I was worried about everything like the fight and the life there. Actually, the life in there was totally different compared to Japan. I did Homestay, so I stayed at the resident's house. It didn't have any electric equipments and faucets. When I washed clothes, I had to use well water. I couldn't believe the situation because I never used well water in Japan. It was a little bit hard to live there. However, the residents were very kind and friendly, even though I was a stranger. I didn't understand the language spoken in Cambodia, but they accepted me. I learned that the languages didn't matter to connect people from other countries. The best thing was heart. When I had to say goodbye, every memory I experienced there was flashbacks, then I didn't want to leave. It has been a while since I visited there. When I have time. I would like to go there to meet them.
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The hardest goodbye I ever had is in Cambodia. Three years ago, I went to Cambodia to teach Engsih and Japanese. (Good)
It was my first time visiting other countries alone, so I was worried about everything like the fight and the life there.
It was my first time visiting another country alone, so I was worried about everything like the flight (fight?) and the lifestyle there.
Actually, the life in there was totally different compared to Japan.
Actually, the lifestyle there was totally different from life in Japan.
I did Homestay, so I stayed at the resident's house.
I did a homestay, so I stayed in a resident’s house.
It didn't have any electric equipments and faucets.
It didn’t have electricity or running water.
When I washed clothes, I had to use well water. (Good)
I couldn't believe the situation because I never used well water in Japan.
I couldn’t believe the situation (or I was completely surprised by the situation) because I had never used well water in Japan.
It was a little bit hard to live there.
It was a little difficult to live there. (or Living there was challenging)
However, the residents were very kind and friendly, even though I was a stranger.
I didn't understand the language spoken in Cambodia, but they accepted me.
I didn’t understand the Cambodian language, but people accepted me.
I learned that the languages didn't matter to connect people from other countries.
I learned that the language differences don’t prevent one from connecting with people. Or
I found that language differences didn’t keep (or prevent) me from connecting with people.
The best thing was heart.
The best thing was my strong feelings about the place. (Or the friends I made, or something like that)
When I had to say goodbye, every memory I experienced there was flashbacks, then I didn't want to leave.
When I had to say goodbye, I had flashbacks of all the experiences I had there, and I didn’t want to leave.
It has been a while since I visited there. (Good)
When I have time. I would like to go there to meet them.
When I have the time, I would like to go back and meet my friends again.
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