I went to Victoria to visit my uncle and aunt for several days. Their house is very nice, and I felt comfortable living in there. My uncle and aunt are really good at cooking, so I definitely had my best dinner of the year at their place. We had a pretty good Christmas Eve talking and watching TVs with wrapped gifts under the Christmas tree. I opened a gift and got a makeup gift box on the morning of the Christmas day, and my cousin got the Chai pet from me. Those days I spent with my uncle's family in Victoria was the highlight of this Christmas break. klingt das natürlich?

I went to Victoria to visit my uncle and aunt for several days. Their house was very nice, and I felt comfortable living there. My uncle and aunt are really good cooks, so I definitely had the best dinner of the year at their place. We had a pretty good Christmas Eve talking and watching TV with gifts under the Christmas tree. I opened a gift and got a makeup box the next morning on Christmas Day, and my cousin got the Chai pet that I got them. Those days I spent with my uncle's family in Victoria was the highlight of this Christmas break.

Changing is to was in the second sentence keeps past tense throughout. But overall very good!