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Please correct my short essay.
What are some advantages if men and women can choose their career paths without being influenced by gender stereotype?
Unless women choose their career pathes, they should choose different career paths instead even though it's not that they really want to engage.As a result, they will have a hard time because of their job.Additionally they may go beyond men in a field that's regarded as men are better at such as science.There's no evindence with women's abilitiy.However women can't be worse than men.Industry and science improve only when men cooperates with women in my opinion.Therefore if men and women can choose their career paths freely, we will get more progression in term of science and industry.
Does this sound correct?If not, correct it please.
Please correct my short essay.
What are some advantages if men and women can choose their career paths without being influenced by gender stereotype?
Unless women choose their career pathes, they should choose different career paths instead even though it's not that they really want to engage.As a result, they will have a hard time because of their job.Additionally they may go beyond men in a field that's regarded as men are better at such as science.There's no evindence with women's abilitiy.However women can't be worse than men.Industry and science improve only when men cooperates with women in my opinion.Therefore if men and women can choose their career paths freely, we will get more progression in term of science and industry.
Does this sound correct?If not, correct it please.
What are some advantages if men and women can choose their career paths without being influenced by gender stereotype?
Unless women choose their career pathes, they should choose different career paths instead even though it's not that they really want to engage.As a result, they will have a hard time because of their job.Additionally they may go beyond men in a field that's regarded as men are better at such as science.There's no evindence with women's abilitiy.However women can't be worse than men.Industry and science improve only when men cooperates with women in my opinion.Therefore if men and women can choose their career paths freely, we will get more progression in term of science and industry.
Does this sound correct?If not, correct it please.
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is this for school?
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is there a word count limit or any other requirements for the short essay ?
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No,I don't have any requirements except for a word count limit.My essay sould be in about 100 words.
No,I don't have any requirements except for a word count limit.My essay sould be in about 100 words.
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Without the influence of gender stereotypes men and women would be able to seek different career paths. Currently, there is a division of labor in the workforce. There is no evidence one gender is superior to another. Passion, as well as merit would become the main factors in choosing a career. This leads to more diversity and representation in personnel. Increasing collaboration and teamwork with the new perspectives given from both genders. There would be a boost in productivity, organizational performance, retention and recruitment of talent.
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^^ This is 86 words. I left some word count available so you can write a conclusion sentence. If you want advice or tips, let me know. I tried to keep what you were trying to say intact. I hopes this helps.
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