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Is there somebody who can correct my small text? thank you for your help 😊
Thanks, of the law in 1965, Women have the right to work without having the permission of her husband. Nowadays, most of women can have a job. But according to the INSEE women in full time receive -18 per cent on their salary and she has less of chances to have a powerful position. Do you know why? Certainly, because women would like to build a family and take care more of them, then women would focus less on their work than men. Also, there is the sexism cliché, there is the idea that men are more qualified than women.

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jelly_jilli
1 Mär 2020

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Thanks to the law in 1965, women had the right to work without having the permission of their husbands. Nowadays, most women can have a job. But according to the INSEE, women in full time jobs receive 18 percent on their salaries and have less chances to have a powerful position. Do you know why? Certainly because women would like to build a family, and take care of their family. Then women would focus less on their work, and more on men. Also, there is the sexism cliché, there is the idea that men are more qualified than women.

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FT43
1 Mär 2020

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"Thanks to the law passed in 1965, women now have the right to work without their husband's permission. These days, most women hold jobs. But according to the INSEE, women working full-time receive a salary 18% lower than men on average, and are much more unlikely to hold a higher position. Do you know why? Certainly, because women like to build families and take care of them, therefore women focus less on their work than men typically do. However, sexism is all too common, with the idea that men are inherently more qualified or valuable than women."

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Is there somebody who can correct my small text? thank you for your help 😊 Thanks, of the law in 1965, Women have the right to work without having the permission of her husband. Nowadays, most of women can have a job. But according to the INSEE women in full time receive -18 per cent on their salary and she has less of chances to have a powerful position. Do you know why? Certainly, because women would like to build a family and take care more of them, then women would focus less on their work than men. Also, there is the sexism cliché, there is the idea that men are more qualified than women.
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