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Hi! Could you help me correct this text I wrote please?:
I think that joining your school would allow me to consolidate my knowledges and to tame the field that fascinates me from a new angle, more oriented towards my expectations and my ambitions. Opening up to the world and its possibilities, working and creating with it is what motivates me the most. I'm looking foward to finally find it out."
If it's possible, could you please give me some words or different ways to express and write my text in a more advanced english?
Thank you in advance😊
Hi! Could you help me correct this text I wrote please?:
I think that joining your school would allow me to consolidate my knowledges and to tame the field that fascinates me from a new angle, more oriented towards my expectations and my ambitions. Opening up to the world and its possibilities, working and creating with it is what motivates me the most. I'm looking foward to finally find it out."
If it's possible, could you please give me some words or different ways to express and write my text in a more advanced english?
Thank you in advance😊
I think that joining your school would allow me to consolidate my knowledges and to tame the field that fascinates me from a new angle, more oriented towards my expectations and my ambitions. Opening up to the world and its possibilities, working and creating with it is what motivates me the most. I'm looking foward to finally find it out."
If it's possible, could you please give me some words or different ways to express and write my text in a more advanced english?
Thank you in advance😊
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- Englisch (UK)
I strongly believe that joining your school would give me the opportunity to consolidate my knowledge and gain new insights in this fascinating field, thus allowing me to further pursue my goals and ambitions. Discovering more about the world and its endless possibilities, alongside woking hard to create value, is ultimately what I strive for. I look forward to pursuing these things with passion and vigour."
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- Französisch (Frankreich)
Thank you so much for your corrections and all the vocabulary you brought me! It helps me a lot!
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