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Đoạn văn này có bị lỗi ngữ pháp với logic không ạ?
On top of that, doing housework without help leads to unfair between males and females. Not only that, this problem can bring them into conflict. For example, in Vietnam, the most of women likely to stay at home so they have to work household alone. However, there is an increasing number of women working full time but they still do domestic without help. This lead to a lot of contradictions because they feel disadvantage compared with men. As a result, sharing household can make women happier because of justice
Đoạn văn này có bị lỗi ngữ pháp với logic không ạ?
On top of that, doing housework without help leads to unfair between males and females. Not only that, this problem can bring them into conflict. For example, in Vietnam, the most of women likely to stay at home so they have to work household alone. However, there is an increasing number of women working full time but they still do domestic without help. This lead to a lot of contradictions because they feel disadvantage compared with men. As a result, sharing household can make women happier because of justice
On top of that, doing housework without help leads to unfair between males and females. Not only that, this problem can bring them into conflict. For example, in Vietnam, the most of women likely to stay at home so they have to work household alone. However, there is an increasing number of women working full time but they still do domestic without help. This lead to a lot of contradictions because they feel disadvantage compared with men. As a result, sharing household can make women happier because of justice
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may say ‘sharing the load of housework’ (not understand at the beginning, thought saying domestic problem)
can skip ‘not only that’
i wont use ‘can’ to emphasize this is the real problem
are likely, X likely
most of the women, X the most of
this leads, X lead
do household , ‘work household’ kinda weird
X disadvantage
um for whole is little bit unnatural, but can’t say you are wrong, i mean also from the point of view
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- Englisch (US)
- Traditionelles Chinesisch (Hong Kong)
- Traditionelles Chinesisch (Taiwan)
may say ‘sharing the load of housework’ (not understand at the beginning, thought saying domestic problem)
can skip ‘not only that’
i wont use ‘can’ to emphasize this is the real problem
are likely, X likely
most of the women, X the most of
this leads, X lead
do household , ‘work household’ kinda weird
X disadvantage
um for whole is little bit unnatural, but can’t say you are wrong, i mean also from the point of view
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