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If voter turnout increases, poor political institutions will improve.
In addition, once they take up reading the newspaper, they will be better at reading and vocabulary than average Japanese. klingt das natürlich?
If voter turnout increases, poor political institutions will improve.
In addition, once they take up reading the newspaper, they will be better at reading and vocabulary than average Japanese. klingt das natürlich?
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If voter turnout increases, poor political institutions will improve.
In addition, once theymore takevoters upstart reading the newspaper, they will be better at reading and have a wider vocabulary than the average Japanese person.
In addition, once theymore takevoters upstart reading the newspaper, they will be better at reading and have a wider vocabulary than the average Japanese person.
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If voter turnout increases, poor political institutions will improve.
In addition, once theymore takevoters upstart reading the newspaper, they will be better at reading and have a wider vocabulary than the average Japanese person.
In addition, once theymore takevoters upstart reading the newspaper, they will be better at reading and have a wider vocabulary than the average Japanese person.
Your second sentence is confusing. Since the "they" could refer to either voters or institutions, it's better to use the noun instead of the pronoun in the beginning of the sentence.
For the middle of the sentence, you say "have a vocabulary". I'm struggling to explain why. It's either because it's an idiom or because it's not an action.
For the end, you need a few more words there for clarity. Just "average Japanese" is too ambiguous.
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- The voters show their veto power to the government by their votes klingt das natürlich?
- Was bedeutet voter registration?
- In 2008, 95% of black voters voted for Barack Obama. klingt das natürlich?
Your second sentence is confusing. Since the "they" could refer to either voters or institutions, it's better to use the noun instead of the pronoun in the beginning of the sentence.
For the middle of the sentence, you say "have a vocabulary". I'm struggling to explain why. It's either because it's an idiom or because it's not an action.
For the end, you need a few more words there for clarity. Just "average Japanese" is too ambiguous.