Does this sound natural to you? Feel free to revise this. “During my depression time, I wrote the first song of my life. The song is very artistic, its first bar notes are high and exciting, which represents the original me, and then the song becomes poetic, this indicated the hard situations that I was struggling with. Whenever I listened to this song, I always think of that difficult period. I wrote the song mostly at night. At night, I sat by the bed, looking out of the window, imagining myself as if sitting on the top of a high tree, watching the stars winking at me, creating my own melody”.