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Topic: small, independent shops and businesses can survive in modern society.

I agree with this opinion.
To begin with, I think that these shops and businesses are tend to have some customers , so I think these shops and businesses should do service for customer and keep it. I believe that survice make customers feeling good and would think buy again.
Also I think that these days more and more people using internet and internet shopping, so these shops and businesses should make their website and sale their goods. Internet need not to spend a lot of cost,so they will tickle easily. Perhaps some people who interested the website may buy their goods. these shops and businesses of customer will increasingly.
So what I said, small independent shops and businesses should move something to increasing their customer. As a result these shops and businesses can survive in modern society.

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2 Okt 2020

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I agree with this opinion.
To begin with, I think that these shops and businesses tend to have loyal customers , so I think that if these shops and businesses do good services for their customers, they will keep them. I believe that good service makes customers feel good and want to buy again.
Also, I think that these days more and more people are using the internet and online shopping, so these shops and businesses should make a website to sell their goods. Selling online is not expensive, so they will make profit easily. Perhaps, if some people who are interested the website may buy their goods, these shops and businesses' customers will increase.
To conclude what I said, small independent shops and businesses should expand their selling strategies to increase their customer numbers. As a result, these shops and businesses can survive in modern society.

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