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26 Dez 2020
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Hello! I am John, and I am writing this email to get more information about the junior manager position of your company.
I majored in management and I’m bilingual in English and Korea. After graduation, I was searching for a job where I can use my major and my strength, and I found your job advertisement. Although I just graduated an undergraduate school, I have experience in a startup. One of the values I put importance on is work-life balance. Could you let me know how many hours the job will have to work a week?
Plus, I want to know what tasks the junior manager will do to check whether this is the job I’m looking for. Can you please send me information about the tasks of the job position?
Any problem here??
Hello! I am John, and I am writing this email to get more information about the junior manager position of your company.
I majored in management and I’m bilingual in English and Korea. After graduation, I was searching for a job where I can use my major and my strength, and I found your job advertisement. Although I just graduated an undergraduate school, I have experience in a startup. One of the values I put importance on is work-life balance. Could you let me know how many hours the job will have to work a week?
Plus, I want to know what tasks the junior manager will do to check whether this is the job I’m looking for. Can you please send me information about the tasks of the job position?
Any problem here??
I majored in management and I’m bilingual in English and Korea. After graduation, I was searching for a job where I can use my major and my strength, and I found your job advertisement. Although I just graduated an undergraduate school, I have experience in a startup. One of the values I put importance on is work-life balance. Could you let me know how many hours the job will have to work a week?
Plus, I want to know what tasks the junior manager will do to check whether this is the job I’m looking for. Can you please send me information about the tasks of the job position?
Any problem here??
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26 Dez 2020
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It is really good! If you sent this already, I don't think your grammar would cause any problems. But because it seems like this is a job application, i will try revising it to it's best potential so you can have more ideas:
I majored in management and I'm bilingual in English and Korean. After graduating, I searched for a job where I can utilize my strength and my major, and found your advertisement. Although I have just done an undergraduate, I also have experience in a start up. One of the values I put importance on is work-life balance. Could you please let me know the working hours of this job per week? Additionally, I would like to know what tasks a junior manager does in your company. Please send me information about the tasks of this job position.
These are just some suggestions, as I believe your version was fine as well. But there's always room for improvement!
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- Englisch (US)
It is really good! If you sent this already, I don't think your grammar would cause any problems. But because it seems like this is a job application, i will try revising it to it's best potential so you can have more ideas:
I majored in management and I'm bilingual in English and Korean. After graduating, I searched for a job where I can utilize my strength and my major, and found your advertisement. Although I have just done an undergraduate, I also have experience in a start up. One of the values I put importance on is work-life balance. Could you please let me know the working hours of this job per week? Additionally, I would like to know what tasks a junior manager does in your company. Please send me information about the tasks of this job position.
These are just some suggestions, as I believe your version was fine as well. But there's always room for improvement!
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Thank you so much for answering this long question!! Actually, this is not a true application.
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