Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? "The Internet needs to be controlled more strictly" (120～150 words)

I disagree with this statement. Rather, we should accelerate the use of the Internet. I have several reasons.

First of all, The Internet has a lot of roles in our society nowadays. It offers us many amusements, online shopping, and shows the way to some destination on a screen. Without its benefit, we must feel inconvenient, and what is worse, we may be able to do nothing.

Secondly, we can get to know many people through the Internet. Even there is a long distance between them, we can contact and know what is he doing just now, making a relationship deeper and deeper. Without the Internet, such chances would never appear.

The Internet is a crucial part of our society.
We should focus on the utility and encourage people to have access to it.

Question

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? "The Internet needs to be controlled more strictly" (120～150 words)

I disagree with this statement. Rather, we should accelerate the use of the Internet.  I have several reasons.

First of all, The Internet has a lot of roles in our society nowadays. It offers us many amusements, online shopping, and shows the way to some destination on a screen. Without its benefit, we must feel inconvenient, and what is worse, we may be able to do nothing.

Secondly, we can get to know many people through the Internet. Even there is a long distance between them, we can contact and know what is he doing just now, making a relationship deeper and deeper. Without the Internet, such chances would never appear.

The Internet is a crucial part of our society.
We should focus on the utility and encourage people to have access to it.

maddie_c11 · Answer

It should be:
“First of all, the internet *plays* a lot of roles in our society nowadays.”
“It offers us *entertainment,* online shopping, and *international experiences through a screen*” (are you trying to say that the internet helps you see the world/learn about the world?).
“The internet makes our lives more* convenient, and *helps allow us to do many things in life.*”
“Even *if* there a long distance between us, we can contact *each other* and know what *each other is* doing, making *our* relationship deeper and deeper. Without the internet, *these opportunities* would *not be possible.*
“We should focus on the *usefulness of it* and encourage people to have access to it.”

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