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Can you correct me?
*sorry if there are some letters missing some where. I am writing from my tiny phone xD *
It was a day like any other. I looked out through the window expecting to see a beautiful blue sky streching in the horizon, but instead of a warm morning and a fragile sky, my eyes met a dark blue cover which was slowly melting in a storm of thunders. Everything was quiet outside . The only noise you could hear was the deep scream of the clouds breaking the sky in a hundred pieces of glass. The rain hadn't started yet, but the wind swirling around was a sign that it won't last any longer. I couldn't even finish my thought, when the cold sharp rain started to pierce the ground.
I was sitting there, quietly, watching the soul of nature dancing around.
Can you correct me?
*sorry if there are some letters missing some where. I am writing from my tiny phone xD *
It was a day like any other. I looked out through the window expecting to see a beautiful blue sky streching in the horizon, but instead of a warm morning and a fragile sky, my eyes met a dark blue cover which was slowly melting in a storm of thunders. Everything was quiet outside . The only noise you could hear was the deep scream of the clouds breaking the sky in a hundred pieces of glass. The rain hadn't started yet, but the wind swirling around was a sign that it won't last any longer. I couldn't even finish my thought, when the cold sharp rain started to pierce the ground.
I was sitting there, quietly, watching the soul of nature dancing around.
*sorry if there are some letters missing some where. I am writing from my tiny phone xD *
It was a day like any other. I looked out through the window expecting to see a beautiful blue sky streching in the horizon, but instead of a warm morning and a fragile sky, my eyes met a dark blue cover which was slowly melting in a storm of thunders. Everything was quiet outside . The only noise you could hear was the deep scream of the clouds breaking the sky in a hundred pieces of glass. The rain hadn't started yet, but the wind swirling around was a sign that it won't last any longer. I couldn't even finish my thought, when the cold sharp rain started to pierce the ground.
I was sitting there, quietly, watching the soul of nature dancing around.
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