Question
Aktualisiert am
10 Mai 2021
- Japanisch
-
Englisch (US)
-
Englisch (UK)
Frage über Englisch (US)
Do the following sentences sound natural?
It's said that we need to prepare 20 million yen as a retirement fund in Japan. That is to say, partners have to put aside 40 million yen between two of them together for their life after retirement. If the wife is a housewife and they have children, I think there are few people who can prepare such a large amount of money.
In Showa-period, there was a phrase, "The most important thing for men is earn a lot, for women is to be beautiful" in Japan, but it has become a past story.
Nowadays, most Japanese men don't have lots of money, so it has become a poor performance for women to appeal their femininity against Japanese men.
I think the lifetime non-marriage rate in Japan will continue to rise in the future until Japanese view of marriage dramatically changes. I wish a real gender equality would arrive in Japan, too.
Do the following sentences sound natural?
It's said that we need to prepare 20 million yen as a retirement fund in Japan. That is to say, partners have to put aside 40 million yen between two of them together for their life after retirement. If the wife is a housewife and they have children, I think there are few people who can prepare such a large amount of money.
In Showa-period, there was a phrase, "The most important thing for men is earn a lot, for women is to be beautiful" in Japan, but it has become a past story.
Nowadays, most Japanese men don't have lots of money, so it has become a poor performance for women to appeal their femininity against Japanese men.
I think the lifetime non-marriage rate in Japan will continue to rise in the future until Japanese view of marriage dramatically changes. I wish a real gender equality would arrive in Japan, too.
It's said that we need to prepare 20 million yen as a retirement fund in Japan. That is to say, partners have to put aside 40 million yen between two of them together for their life after retirement. If the wife is a housewife and they have children, I think there are few people who can prepare such a large amount of money.
In Showa-period, there was a phrase, "The most important thing for men is earn a lot, for women is to be beautiful" in Japan, but it has become a past story.
Nowadays, most Japanese men don't have lots of money, so it has become a poor performance for women to appeal their femininity against Japanese men.
I think the lifetime non-marriage rate in Japan will continue to rise in the future until Japanese view of marriage dramatically changes. I wish a real gender equality would arrive in Japan, too.
Antworten
Mehr Kommentare lesen
- Englisch (US)
remove together from “two of them together”, and change the last sentence to “ I wish for real gender equality in Japan”
War diese Antwort hilfreich?
[Neuigkeiten] Hallo du! Die/derjenige, die/der eine Sprache lernt!
Möchten Sie wissen, wie Sie Ihre Sprachkenntnisse verbessern können❓ Alles, was Sie tun müssen, ist, Ihre Schreiben durch einen Muttersprachler korrigieren zu lassen!
Mit HiNative können Sie Ihre Schreiben kostenlos durch Muttersprachler korrigieren lassen ✍️✨.
Mit HiNative können Sie Ihre Schreiben kostenlos durch Muttersprachler korrigieren lassen ✍️✨.
Registrieren
Ähnliche Fragen
Ähnliche Fragen
- Do you put on make up everyday?
- Was ist der Unterschied zwischen How did you do? und How are you going? ?
- who do you think is the most famous Japanese ?
Trending questions
- how can I discribe black people hair, can I say curly, the books don't teach us..
- Which sounds more natural, "Go two blocks" or "Go for two blocks," when giving directions?
- I loooooooooooove aussie accent.... I loooooooooooove Australia so much. I'd like to go back th...
- Do these have the same meaning? When do you usually say these? That's just how things work here. ...
- What does UP mean here ? Is this an abbreviation of something? "Greyhound are seeking experie...
Newest Questions (HOT)
- is it natural to say it like this in german: Ich werde trotzdem ein platz in meinem riesigen ...
- What sounds better? Ich sollte Deutsch lernen, wenn ich Deutsch sprechen können will. Ich s...
- Can you use “möchte” and ”wenn” together? For example when saying “Ich möchte eine Reise machen,...
- ,,häufig angetroffen, aber nicht eingefallen, was das auf Englisch ist? Jetzt zeige ich euch" Es...
- Is this correct? Mein papa kaufst Brot im Laden
Newest Questions
- i just learned that there is formal and informal plus singular and plural for second person in De...
- Is it acceptable to say “in meiner Lage”?
- Sagen Sie, was Sie von zu Hause aus für das Unternehmen tun können. what is that "aus" in the mi...
- how can I say "face to face" contacts in german? for example, we can be friends with someone,virt...
- Ist dieser Satz richtig?? Wenn ich von zu Hause arbeiten könnte, würde das viele Vorteile für uns...
Vorherige Frage/ Nächste Frage
Danke! Sei versichert, dass dein Feedback den anderen Benutzern nicht angezeigt wird.
Vielen Dank! Dein Feedback wird sehr geschätzt.