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I cannot see the star in the night sky as I cannot see your eyes right now.
but the clouds is going away, I would be able to see your eyes and tell you.
te quiero.
klingt das natürlich?
I cannot see the star in the night sky as I cannot see your eyes right now.
but the clouds is going away, I would be able to see your eyes and tell you.
te quiero.
klingt das natürlich?
but the clouds is going away, I would be able to see your eyes and tell you.
te quiero.
klingt das natürlich?
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- Englisch (UK)
Etwas unnatürlich
"I cannot see the stars" and "the clouds are going away" would be better.
It's... very poetic, though.
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Thanks a lot :D

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