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Topic: Agree or disagree: More people should become vegetarians in the future.

I agree with the idea that people should become vegetarians gradually in the future. There are two reasons to support my opinion. First, more and more current people are really interested in vegetarian foods because these foods are known as heathy foods in these days. For example, recently, there are a lot of high-cal something to eat. However, it would be possible to be serious sick if they eat too much these foods. I think it’s very dangerous. That’s why I believe that people should eat vegetarian foods. Second, nowadays, there are many products for vegetarians such as hamburger and cake. Because of the these products, it’s very easier for people to get vegetarian foods in the supermarket, the convenience store and the restaurant. For these reasons, I think that more people ought to become vegetarians in the future.(129words)

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Could you check my writing?🙌
Topic: Agree or disagree: More people should become vegetarians in the future.

I agree with the idea that people should become vegetarians gradually in the future. There are two reasons to support my opinion. First, more and more current people are really interested in vegetarian foods because these foods are known as heathy foods in these days. For example, recently, there are a lot of high-cal something to eat. However, it would be possible to be serious sick if they eat too much these foods. I think it’s very dangerous. That’s why I believe that people should eat vegetarian foods. Second, nowadays, there are many products for vegetarians such as hamburger and cake. Because of the these products, it’s very easier for people to get vegetarian foods in the supermarket, the convenience store and the restaurant. For these reasons, I think that more people ought to become vegetarians in the future.(129words)

lizzie_amiki · Answer

yes, sure. good job!

Topic: Agree or disagree: More people should become vegetarians in the future.

I agree with the idea that people should become vegetarians in the future. There are two reasons to support this. First, more and more people are interested in vegetarian foods because these foods are known as healthy foods these days. For example, recently, there are lots of high-cal foods to eat. However, you can get seriously sick if you eat too much of these foods. I think it’s very dangerous. That’s why I believe that people should eat vegetarian foods. Second, nowadays, there are many products for vegetarians such as vegetarian hamburgers, cake, etc. Because of these products, it’s much easier for people to get vegetarian foods in the supermarket, convenience stores, and restaurants. For these reasons, I think that more people ought to become vegetarians in the future. (129 words)

lizzie_amiki · Answer

@himagogo ah! the supermarket is also the plural way of saying it!

lizzie_amiki · Answer

@himagogo yep!