I wonder if my self-intro sounds natural.
I’m Ricky. I’m originally from Taiwan, but I have been living abroad since I graduated from college. Regarding my Japanese, I have been working with Japanese people and communicate with them in fluent Japanese for a while. Therefore, I believe I don’t have any trouble articulating my ideas in the language.

Throughout my career as a software engineer, I have used Java, SQL, HTML, CSS, and JavaScript in software development. Other than that, I also have a solid understanding of the MVC model when it comes to software development. Over the past year, the projects I have participated in are the online booking system for a cruise company, general management system for appliance companies, and household financial management network system.

Apart from my skills in programming, I also have a great command of English and Japanese. Even though I did not end up staying in Australia, I still continued improving my English. As a result, I got a score of 935 on the TOEIC test and 7.5 out of 9.0 on the IELTS, which stands for International English Language Testing System, in the academic module in the past two years.

One of my strengths is that I am willing to take up new challenges. I would pretty much appreciate you if give me the chance to join your team.

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I wonder if my self-intro sounds natural.
I’m Ricky. I’m originally from Taiwan, but I have been living abroad since I graduated from college. Regarding my Japanese, I have been working with Japanese people and communicate with them in fluent Japanese for a while. Therefore, I believe I don’t have any trouble articulating my ideas in the language.

Throughout my career as a software engineer, I have used Java, SQL, HTML, CSS, and JavaScript in software development. Other than that, I also have a solid understanding of the MVC model when it comes to software development. Over the past year, the projects I have participated in are the online booking system for a cruise company, general management system for appliance companies, and household financial management network system.

Apart from my skills in programming, I also have a great command of English and Japanese. Even though I did not end up staying in Australia, I still continued improving my English. As a result, I got a score of 935 on the TOEIC test and 7.5 out of 9.0 on the IELTS, which stands for International English Language Testing System, in the academic module in the past two years.

One of my strengths is that I am willing to take up new challenges. I would pretty much appreciate you if give me the chance to join your team.

paulf9765 · Accepted Answer

"Regarding my Japanese, I have been working with Japanese people and communicat*ing* with them in fluent Japanese for a while"

"*a* general management system for appliance companies, and *a* household financial management network system."

And most importantly,

"I would very much appreciate it if you give me the chance to join your team."

o_kim_a · Answer

Regarding my Japanese, I have been working and communicating with Japanese people in fluent Japanese for a while.

Over the past year, I have participated in various projects such as an online booking system for a cruise company, a general management system for appliance companies, and a household financial management network system.

I would very much appreciate it if you'd give me the chance to join your team.

o_kim_a · Answer

@Keqing no problem!