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15 Okt 2015
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They would like to invite customer to factory tour, so unit appearance is one of the factor for decision. klingt das natürlich?
They would like to invite customer to factory tour, so unit appearance is one of the factor for decision. klingt das natürlich?
彼は顧客を工場見学に招待したいと思っているので、機器の外観も決定のための一つの要素になります。
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15 Okt 2015
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- Englisch (US)
Etwas unnatürlich
They would like to invite the/a customer on a factory tour, and so the appearance of the machines has become one of the deciding factors for giving the tour.
I added the/a because it's a "count" noun
I used machines because unit could also refer to staff. Machines sounds less ambiguous. Also based on you sentence in Japanese, I think this word fits better.
'Deciding factor' is a simpler way of saying factor for decision
I added "for giving the tour" to provide clarification on what decision is being made based on the appearance of the machines.
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- Englisch (US)
Etwas unnatürlich
They would like to invite the/a customer on a factory tour, and so the appearance of the machines has become one of the deciding factors for giving the tour.
I added the/a because it's a "count" noun
I used machines because unit could also refer to staff. Machines sounds less ambiguous. Also based on you sentence in Japanese, I think this word fits better.
'Deciding factor' is a simpler way of saying factor for decision
I added "for giving the tour" to provide clarification on what decision is being made based on the appearance of the machines.
- Japanisch
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