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Can you tell me if my wording / writing is correct? please 🙏🙂
"The Bob ghost"
In my house live a ghost called Bob. I can't see it but I can hear it. One day , I found it when I was alone in house. It was afternoon and I was studying in my bedroom, suddenly I heard a voice to say: "Bob". I stopped my reading and went to see who was there. But when I get to the door nobody was there.
So I thought that I needed a break and I decided to stay in the living-room watching TV. Then the TV turned off and one more time someone said: "Bob". I didn't know what to do because I was a little scared but angry too. For that reason I shouted "It's not fun" and TV turned on again.
When my parents arrived to house I told them the story and they was scarred but next they started to ask me for details.
Finally, we consider that the ghost isn't danger and maybe it's more scared than we.
Can you tell me if my wording / writing is correct? please 🙏🙂
"The Bob ghost"
In my house live a ghost called Bob. I can't see it but I can hear it. One day , I found it when I was alone in house. It was afternoon and I was studying in my bedroom, suddenly I heard a voice to say: "Bob". I stopped my reading and went to see who was there. But when I get to the door nobody was there.
So I thought that I needed a break and I decided to stay in the living-room watching TV. Then the TV turned off and one more time someone said: "Bob". I didn't know what to do because I was a little scared but angry too. For that reason I shouted "It's not fun" and TV turned on again.
When my parents arrived to house I told them the story and they was scarred but next they started to ask me for details.
Finally, we consider that the ghost isn't danger and maybe it's more scared than we.
"The Bob ghost"
In my house live a ghost called Bob. I can't see it but I can hear it. One day , I found it when I was alone in house. It was afternoon and I was studying in my bedroom, suddenly I heard a voice to say: "Bob". I stopped my reading and went to see who was there. But when I get to the door nobody was there.
So I thought that I needed a break and I decided to stay in the living-room watching TV. Then the TV turned off and one more time someone said: "Bob". I didn't know what to do because I was a little scared but angry too. For that reason I shouted "It's not fun" and TV turned on again.
When my parents arrived to house I told them the story and they was scarred but next they started to ask me for details.
Finally, we consider that the ghost isn't danger and maybe it's more scared than we.
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"The Ghost, Bob"
A ghost lives in my house named Bob.
I can't see him but I can hear him. I discovered him one day when I was alone in the house. I was studying in my bedroom in the afternoon and suddenly I heard a voice say, "Bob". I stopped reading and went to see who was there. But when I get to the door nobody was there.
So I thought that I needed a break and I decided to stay in the living room and watch TV. Then the TV turned off and one more time someone said, "Bob". I didn't know what to do because I was a little scared but also angry. For that reason I shouted "It's not funny" and then TV turned on again.
When my parents arrived home, I told them the story and they were scarred but then they started to ask me for details.
Finally, we figured that the ghost wasn't dangerous and it's probably more scared than we are.
- Spanisch (Spanien)
@geodeal thanks for your answer 😊.
can you explain to me why you changed "watching tv" for "and watch tv".
Please 🙏 and Thanks
can you explain to me why you changed "watching tv" for "and watch tv".
Please 🙏 and Thanks

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So I thought that I needed a break and I decided to stay in the living room and watch TV.
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So I thought that I needed a break and I decided to stay in the living room and CONTINUE watchING TV.
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So I thought that I needed a break and I decided to stay in the living room xxx watching TV.

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