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We learn that the writer's my mum is thoughtful and hearty. She is thought and shows her lover for her daughter, Waris, when she wakes Waris up to let her escape- from the horrible, forced marriage arrangement. We can infer from this that her mum has also probably been forced to an unwanted marriage herself, therefore wishing her daughter to not experience the same thing.
The mum is also hearty because she risks herself to be "told off" by her husband when he finds out about this. Moreover, Waris instantly thinks of her mum when she feels exhausted about this never-ending escape: "I just wanted to go back home with Mama" (line 55). This portrays the close relationship Waris had with her gentle and caring mum. klingt das natürlich?
The mum is also hearty because she risks herself to be "told off" by her husband when he finds out about this. Moreover, Waris instantly thinks of her mum when she feels exhausted about this never-ending escape: "I just wanted to go back home with Mama" (line 55). This portrays the close relationship Waris had with her gentle and caring mum. klingt das natürlich?
- Englisch (UK)
Etwas unnatürlich
I think 'caring' would be a better word than 'hearty'.
(line3) "she is thoughtful* and shows her love* for her daughter" would be correct
(line9) "forced into* an unwanted marriage"
(line14) “she risks being* 'told off' by her husband" would be correct.
@ilovegot7neverever Apart from that it was really good, what you infered from the text made sense and there were only a few mistakes. There are many English people I know who probably wouldn't of done as well 😂😂.
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- Englisch (UK)
Etwas unnatürlich
I think 'caring' would be a better word than 'hearty'.
(line3) "she is thoughtful* and shows her love* for her daughter" would be correct
(line9) "forced into* an unwanted marriage"
(line14) “she risks being* 'told off' by her husband" would be correct.
@ilovegot7neverever Apart from that it was really good, what you infered from the text made sense and there were only a few mistakes. There are many English people I know who probably wouldn't of done as well 😂😂.
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- Englisch (UK)
Etwas unnatürlich
oh and "the writer's mum*" (line1)
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