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Evaluation:
The course had a positive impact on myself, as I learned in it how to divide time into four important sections, how to prepare for a new day, and how to arrange the place in a way that makes it easy for me to reach everything easily. Moreover, it mentioned an important point, which is to take enough rest to clear the mind to increase productivity and try to reach excellent work and fast delivery.
It mentioned a point that aroused my interest, which is that we cannot control time, but we can control the course of our lives. For example, if we allocate 30 minutes each day, we will add 26 days to the year, meaning that a few minutes can make a big change. I liked the diverse way of explanation, examples and the various quotes.

One of the negative aspects of this course is the believe mentioned that it is okay to be satisfied with what is average or below average levels. I think that this phrase has a negative impact. It is wrong to always be the same person and get stuck in the same level and mindset. Eventually, not seeking improvements and excellency will not get you anywhere further in life.

‏Reconstruct Self-concept:
I found that my way of dividing my time is wrong, and I needed to learn more time management methods. What I found is taking a rest has a significant impact on productivity level and quick delivery. By dividing my time initially and experimenting with it for one week, I found that it made a huge difference to my achievements and I found that I had plenty of time available in which to develop a new skill. Later, I was able to complete many tasks that I thought would take more time than they usually take of me.

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Action:
After attending the course and completing it, I started drawing a schedule and dividing the tasks required of me and did them on the spot and did not procrastinate. Then, I began to see its impact as soon as it ended and I look forward to the difference it will make in the future. I want to expand in the field of time management and take more courses in the future. And I think that it will benefit me in my university and professional lives, and not only professionally.

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