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Could you check and modify following my essay.

This memo is intended to explain the benefits of becoming vegetarians.
More people should become vegetarians in the future because it could bring about the following two benefits.

First, becoming vegetarians enables many people to be health for a long time.
Second,becoming vegetarians could protect the lives of many animals.

In conclusion, becoming vegetarians could bring about these benefits.

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Could you check and modify following my essay.

This memo is intended to explain the benefits of becoming vegetarians.
More people should become vegetarians in the future because it could bring about the following two benefits.

First, becoming vegetarians enables many people to be health for a long time.
Second,becoming vegetarians could protect the lives of many animals.

In conclusion, becoming vegetarians could bring about these benefits.
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