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It is debatable whether our mankind can solve the most serious problems in the world in this generation. Some people say it would be possible as science technologies progress astonishingly. However, I think those problems will be perpetual because there are a lot of issues which were considered to be solved rapidly, but still remain, and anyone cannot promise that no more problems will occur.
To begin with, a lot of problems are still threatening the world even at this moment. Surprisingly, some of them were thought to be dealt with soon. For example, my country, Korea was divided into two separate nations in 1945. When I was a kid, many people including me believed that we would merge with North Korea soon, which would relieve us from the fear of war. Despite this belief, our country is still separated into two and no one knows when we can be one again. I bet there are other issues in the similar situation as ours.
Secondly, there is a risk of new problems occurring. Some people say even if new evils threaten us, we can get around them with up-to-date technologies and sciences. However, I do not agree with this statement. Looking at this Covid 19 issue, I think it is one of the most severe problems in the world, it has been about 3 years since the disease appeared though. Even with our brilliant medical skills, we barely prevented the small evil from engulfing the earth. To make things worse, more severe diseases than Covid 19 can occur in the future. Like no one could expect we would face the Covid 19 issue, different crises in many ways will come to us out of blue.
All things considered above I am confident it is impossible to solve the most serious problems in the world.
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