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Could anyone check my journal entry?
My daughter and I went to the park with my friends to see Blue bonnet that the flower of Texas. I saw it for the first time. It is purple and beautiful. After that we ate Peruvian food for lunch. It was so good and we enjoyed talking together.
Could anyone check my journal entry?
My daughter and I went to the park with my friends to see Blue bonnet that the flower of Texas. I saw it for the first time. It is purple and beautiful. After that we ate Peruvian food for lunch. It was so good and we enjoyed talking together.
My daughter and I went to the park with my friends to see Blue bonnet that the flower of Texas. I saw it for the first time. It is purple and beautiful. After that we ate Peruvian food for lunch. It was so good and we enjoyed talking together.
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@miyuki2 My daughter and I went to the park with my friends to see Blue Bonnets, the state flower of Texas. It was my first time seeing them, they are purple and beautiful. After that we ate Peruvian food for lunch. The lunch and conversation were good.
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