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Could anyone check my journal entry?
I went to blueberry picking with my family. My kids enjoyed picking it so much and we picked a lot of them. After that we had lunch near the farm. The restaurant was popular and all dishes were so nice! At night we ate all those blueberries, they were sweet and delicious.
Could anyone check my journal entry?
I went to blueberry picking with my family. My kids enjoyed picking it so much and we picked a lot of them. After that we had lunch near the farm. The restaurant was popular and all dishes were so nice! At night we ate all those blueberries, they were sweet and delicious.
I went to blueberry picking with my family. My kids enjoyed picking it so much and we picked a lot of them. After that we had lunch near the farm. The restaurant was popular and all dishes were so nice! At night we ate all those blueberries, they were sweet and delicious.
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That is amazing! Great work! But in your sentence “ The restaurant was popular and all dishes were so nice!” you should say “The restaurant was popular and all THE dishes were so nice!” Everything else in that entry is perfect, you just needed to add ‘the’ before dishes :)
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I agree, great job. These might help it sound more natural.
I went blueberry picking with my family. My kids enjoyed it so much and we picked a lot of blueberries. After that we had lunch near the farm. The restaurant was popular and all the dishes were so nice! In the evening we ate all the blueberries, they were sweet and delicious.
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