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Hello guys! đ Could you check my text, please? You always help me đ
Going to museum can be interesting and amazing experience. People of all ages can improve their knowledge about the history, religion, usual and unusual things etc. Also, museums have national importance; they show the level of cultural development of the country. Of course, museums are good tourist attractions, and on the contrary museums bring money to the treasury of the city.
Another concern is that nowadays people donât appreciate the culture and think that visiting the museums is boring entertainment. Moreover, it is claimed that museums use up money which would be better spent on other things. People always like having fun, education interest them less.
I canât agree with this opinion because in some museums you donât have to pay for a ticket. In addition, money, which we spend for a ticket, go to museumâs improvement.
Hello guys! đ Could you check my text, please? You always help me đ
Going to museum can be interesting and amazing experience. People of all ages can improve their knowledge about the history, religion, usual and unusual things etc. Also, museums have national importance; they show the level of cultural development of the country. Of course, museums are good tourist attractions, and on the contrary museums bring money to the treasury of the city.
Another concern is that nowadays people donât appreciate the culture and think that visiting the museums is boring entertainment. Moreover, it is claimed that museums use up money which would be better spent on other things. People always like having fun, education interest them less.
I canât agree with this opinion because in some museums you donât have to pay for a ticket. In addition, money, which we spend for a ticket, go to museumâs improvement.
Going to museum can be interesting and amazing experience. People of all ages can improve their knowledge about the history, religion, usual and unusual things etc. Also, museums have national importance; they show the level of cultural development of the country. Of course, museums are good tourist attractions, and on the contrary museums bring money to the treasury of the city.
Another concern is that nowadays people donât appreciate the culture and think that visiting the museums is boring entertainment. Moreover, it is claimed that museums use up money which would be better spent on other things. People always like having fun, education interest them less.
I canât agree with this opinion because in some museums you donât have to pay for a ticket. In addition, money, which we spend for a ticket, go to museumâs improvement.
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The museum*
Use money* (not use up)
Educations interests them less*
The money *
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