Does this sound natural?
Hi! My name is Monika and I'm a fully-qualified Polish language teacher. I have a postgraduate diploma in Teaching Polish as a Foreign Language and I teach Polish at the Jagiellonian University in Kraków. I also hold BAs and MAs in English and Japanese, which helps me to better understand the perspective of a foreign language learner. During my MA studies in Japanese, I passed JLPT N1 and spent one year in Japan travelling and studying at Osaka University as a Japanese Government Scholarship Student, which also broadened my horizons as to how it feels to experience a different culture.

In my free time, I like reading books and playing video games. Currently I'm also learning Spanish.

Question

Does this sound natural?
Hi! My name is Monika and I'm a fully-qualified Polish language teacher. I have a postgraduate diploma in Teaching Polish as a Foreign Language and I teach Polish at the Jagiellonian University in Kraków. I also hold BAs and MAs in English and Japanese, which helps me to better understand the perspective of a foreign language learner. During my MA studies in Japanese, I passed JLPT N1 and spent one year in Japan travelling and studying at Osaka University as a Japanese Government Scholarship Student, which also broadened my horizons as to how it feels to experience a different culture.

In my free time, I like reading books and playing video games. Currently I'm also learning Spanish.

eyecy · Answer

I think it sounds perfectly natural. I could nitpick from a reader's perspective- like, for instance, the last sentence of the first paragraph is sort of long and hard to follow, and the 'also' (...which also broadened my horizons...) is ambiguous (does it refer back to the BAs and MAs in English and Japanese or does it refer back to passing the JLPT N1?)

I'd personally remove the 'also' and just say that the year broadened your horizons. That's sort of outside the scope of natural vs unnatural wording, though. I can only comment on things as a reader since I obviously don't have the qualifications you have as an English teacher.

mari__mari__ · Answer

@yan33czka 
„Full qualified“ can also be „qualified“ „an accredited“ etc.
„post graduate“ would be a masters degree. Unless by „post graduate“ you mean Highschool, then that would be a bachelors degree 
„Which also broadened my horizons“ like @eyecy said
In the last statement, it would be more natural to reword it, for example-
„Im currently (also) learning Spanish“ 
^ this sentence would fit best at the start of the statement-
„Im currently (also) learning Spanish AND I like to read book and play video games in my free time“
You can also say „in my free time..“ 
After AND^

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