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Please correct my context:
"Bluetooth is a wireless technology that can be used in distances upmost 10 meters ranges (?) This vastly used technology has an important role in our daily life. As any other vastly used technologies, Buethooth has its own advantages and disadvantages. It has some threatens form hazardous effects on our body systems such as blood circulation, and nervous system to more serious threats that might ruin (?)/ destroy (?) the human beings ."
Please correct my context:
"Bluetooth is a wireless technology that can be used in distances upmost 10 meters ranges (?) This vastly used technology has an important role in our daily life. As any other vastly used technologies, Buethooth has its own advantages and disadvantages. It has some threatens form hazardous effects on our body systems such as blood circulation, and nervous system to more serious threats that might ruin (?)/ destroy (?) the human beings ."
"Bluetooth is a wireless technology that can be used in distances upmost 10 meters ranges (?) This vastly used technology has an important role in our daily life. As any other vastly used technologies, Buethooth has its own advantages and disadvantages. It has some threatens form hazardous effects on our body systems such as blood circulation, and nervous system to more serious threats that might ruin (?)/ destroy (?) the human beings ."
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Corrected version:
"Bluetooth is a wireless technology that has a transmission range of up to 100 meters [Note: Class 1 range is 100 m, Class 2 range is 10 m]. This widely used technology has an important role in our daily lives. As with any widespread technology, Bluetooth has its own advantages and disadvantages. Exposure to Bluetooth radiation has potential hazardous effects on one's health. It poses a threat to the body's central nervous system and potentially may affect blood circulation."
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Note: Bluetooth radiation is non-ionizing microwave radiation. Unlike ionizing radiation (e.g. x-rays) which causes direct cell / DNA damage, non-ionizing radiation does not have enough energy to cause direct cell / DNA damage.
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Corrected version:
"Bluetooth is a wireless technology that has a transmission range of up to 100 meters [Note: Class 1 range is 100 m, Class 2 range is 10 m]. This widely used technology has an important role in our daily lives. As with any widespread technology, Bluetooth has its own advantages and disadvantages. Exposure to Bluetooth radiation has potential hazardous effects on one's health. It poses a threat to the body's central nervous system and potentially may affect blood circulation."
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Note: Bluetooth radiation is non-ionizing microwave radiation. Unlike ionizing radiation (e.g. x-rays) which causes direct cell / DNA damage, non-ionizing radiation does not have enough energy to cause direct cell / DNA damage.
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I don't know how to thank you, @pythonpoole: . Great help as usual! 👍👍👍👍👍💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐
Sorry, could you please correct my last sentence too?
I don't know how to thank you, @pythonpoole: . Great help as usual! 👍👍👍👍👍💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐
Sorry, could you please correct my last sentence too?

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