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12 Mär 2016
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About a bar: I would like you to correct my sentences to more natural English please.
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This is a liquor store, and a standing bar for paid tasting.
They specialize in Japanese alcohol beverages such as sake, wine, beer and liqueur.
Their drink menu includes many kinds of alcohol beverages served by the glass, but the drinks are only a small part of this store's items.
You can purchase any items by the bottle, not by the glass, and drink here without cork charge.
This store offers not only large size bottles but also small size bottle bottles.
So this place is good for coming with a few people and share the small bottle at their spacious standing bar room. klingt das natürlich?
About a bar: I would like you to correct my sentences to more natural English please.
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This is a liquor store, and a standing bar for paid tasting.
They specialize in Japanese alcohol beverages such as sake, wine, beer and liqueur.
Their drink menu includes many kinds of alcohol beverages served by the glass, but the drinks are only a small part of this store's items.
You can purchase any items by the bottle, not by the glass, and drink here without cork charge.
This store offers not only large size bottles but also small size bottle bottles.
So this place is good for coming with a few people and share the small bottle at their spacious standing bar room. klingt das natürlich?
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This is a liquor store, and a standing bar for paid tasting.
They specialize in Japanese alcohol beverages such as sake, wine, beer and liqueur.
Their drink menu includes many kinds of alcohol beverages served by the glass, but the drinks are only a small part of this store's items.
You can purchase any items by the bottle, not by the glass, and drink here without cork charge.
This store offers not only large size bottles but also small size bottle bottles.
So this place is good for coming with a few people and share the small bottle at their spacious standing bar room. klingt das natürlich?
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Etwas unnatürlich
"Their menu includes many kinds of alcoholic beverages served by the glass, but drinks are only a small part of the store's items.
You can purchase many items by the bottle and drink here without cork charge. This store offers both large and smaller sized bottles. They also have a spacious standing bar room, great for coming with a few people to share some drinks."
Do tell me if what I said wasn't what you were implying! (:
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- Englisch (UK)
- Englisch (US)
Etwas unnatürlich
"Their menu includes many kinds of alcoholic beverages served by the glass, but drinks are only a small part of the store's items.
You can purchase many items by the bottle and drink here without cork charge. This store offers both large and smaller sized bottles. They also have a spacious standing bar room, great for coming with a few people to share some drinks."
Do tell me if what I said wasn't what you were implying! (:
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@jessyan
Hello, jessyan.
Thank you for your quick reply!
You understand what I wanted to imply.
I will add another sentence. Is it correct?
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Sharing the bottle is much cost effective than purchasing by the glass.
Hello, jessyan.
Thank you for your quick reply!
You understand what I wanted to imply.
I will add another sentence. Is it correct?
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Sharing the bottle is much cost effective than purchasing by the glass.
- Englisch (UK)
- Englisch (US)
Etwas unnatürlich
"Sharing the bottle is a lot more/much more cost-effective than purchasing by the glass." (:
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- Japanisch
@jessyan
Hi, jessyan.
Thanks again. I am learning natural English with the corrected sentences.
See you around.
Hi, jessyan.
Thanks again. I am learning natural English with the corrected sentences.
See you around.
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