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On 21 st march 2017. I went to dublin with school. I travelled by plane. I was really scared of the plane. I stayed in a 3 star hotel not far from O'connel street. I ate most of time Macdo. I slept in the same room as Cedric. The first day I had visited her trinity college school, of the book of cells and of the old library. Later I visited molly malone and James joyce statue. Then I returned to the hotel rest little. Then I walked and I ate in macdo. Finally in the evening after my shower. I slept. The second day. I had woken up at 7:30 am then I took my shower. at 8h15 in the hotel I had lunch it was very good . 9:30 am I took the bus to go to the malahide castle. It was really very beautiful the visit of the castle. There we were in the port of howth. I seen the sea it wasn't beautiful. Then we had the lunch break we were in the shopping he was really special. I got lost in the point of meeting.Then we returned to the hotel. The professors were very irritated. In the evening I have still eaten in the macro. Then i slept I was very tired. The 3rd and last day. I packed my luggage having woken up. after I had lunch. After I visited liffey and then Ha'Penny bridge , the clarence , temple bar, the city hall, the castle,christ church cathedral.Then I visited saint patrick's cathedral and Saint stephen's green park. I had lunch break and I hate fish and chips in restaurant in temple bar. Then I returned to the hotel. later it is to end we left at the airport to return in belgium.It was my best school trip.
On 21 st march 2017. I went to dublin with school. I travelled by plane. I was really scared of the plane. I stayed in a 3 star hotel not far from O'connel street. I ate most of time Macdo. I slept in the same room as Cedric. The first day I had visited her trinity college school, of the book of cells and of the old library. Later I visited molly malone and James joyce statue. Then I returned to the hotel rest little. Then I walked and I ate in macdo. Finally in the evening after my shower. I slept. The second day. I had woken up at 7:30 am then I took my shower. at 8h15 in the hotel I had lunch it was very good . 9:30 am I took the bus to go to the malahide castle. It was really very beautiful the visit of the castle. There we were in the port of howth. I seen the sea it wasn't beautiful. Then we had the lunch break we were in the shopping he was really special. I got lost in the point of meeting.Then we returned to the hotel. The professors were very irritated. In the evening I have still eaten in the macro. Then i slept I was very tired. The 3rd and last day. I packed my luggage having woken up. after I had lunch. After I visited liffey and then Ha'Penny bridge , the clarence , temple bar, the city hall, the castle,christ church cathedral.Then I visited saint patrick's cathedral and Saint stephen's green park. I had lunch break and I hate fish and chips in restaurant in temple bar. Then I returned to the hotel. later it is to end we left at the airport to return in belgium.It was my best school trip.
hello Can you correct my text please :)
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?????? please help me it's for my exam tomorrow :(
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Hang on and I'll try and correct it :)
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On 21st March 2017 I went to Dublin with my school. I travelled by plane. I was really scared of the plane. I stayed in a 3 star hotel not far from O'Connel Street. I ate McDonald's most of time. I slept in the same room as Cedric. The first day I visited trinity college school, the book of cells (?) and the old library. Later I visited the Molly Malone and James Joyce statues. Then I returned to the hotel to rest a little. Afterwards I walked to McDonald's and ate there. Finally, in the evening after my shower, I slept. On the second day I woke up at 7:30am then I had a shower. At 8:15 I had lunch in the hotel and it was very good. At 9:30am I took the bus to go to Malahide Castle. It was really beautiful. There we were in the port of Howth. I saw the sea but it wasn't beautiful. Then we had a lunch break in the shopping centre which was really special. I got lost and couldn't find the meeting point. Then we returned to the hotel. The teachers were very irritated. In the evening I ate at McDonald's again. Then I slept as I was very tired. On the 3rd and final day I packed my luggage after having woken up. Afterwards I had lunch. After I visited Liffey and then Ha'Penny bridge, the clarence , temple bar, the city hall, the castle and christ church cathedral. Then I visited saint patrick's cathedral and Saint stephen's green park. I had lunch break and I ate fish and chips in the restaurant in temple bar. Then I returned to the hotel. Later on we left to go to the airport to return to Belgium. It was my best school trip.
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