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I love to see the Japanese maple. When I was a 9th grade student, I found so beautiful Japanese maple leaves of which harmony of red, yellow and green colors was awesome in Kyoto. When I went to Kyoto, I was moved that its townscape was so beautiful because of the harmony of tradition and modernity, so I hope I live there someday. klingt das natürlich?
I love to see the Japanese maple. When I was a 9th grade student, I found so beautiful Japanese maple leaves of which harmony of red, yellow and green colors was awesome in Kyoto. When I went to Kyoto, I was moved that its townscape was so beautiful because of the harmony of tradition and modernity, so I hope I live there someday. klingt das natürlich?
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I love to see the Japanese maple leaves. When I was in 9th grade, I found these beautiful leaves in an assortment of colors, from red, to yellow, and green. This was a highlighting factor of the breath-taking view in Kyoto. When I went there, I was touched by its beautiful townscape because of the harmonious blend of the natural beauty of Kyoto from the maple leaves and the improvements made by the city to further enhance the view. I genuinely hope to live there someday.
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