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28 Jun 2017
- Vereinfachtes Chinesisch (China)
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This moment, I am walking for a stroll in a nearby park.
I like strolling in the park. There are a great number of lovely birds in the park. After finishing stroll, I often sat in a bench for view that lovely birds. klingt das natürlich?
This moment, I am walking for a stroll in a nearby park.
I like strolling in the park. There are a great number of lovely birds in the park. After finishing stroll, I often sat in a bench for view that lovely birds. klingt das natürlich?
I like strolling in the park. There are a great number of lovely birds in the park. After finishing stroll, I often sat in a bench for view that lovely birds. klingt das natürlich?
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- Englisch (US)
Etwas unnatürlich
very close! try this
"this moment, I am going for a stroll in a nearby park. I like strolling in the park. there a great number of lovely birds. When I finish my stroll, I often sit on a bench to view the lovely birds.
(this sounds formal, not as many natives would say casually)
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- Englisch (US)
Etwas unnatürlich
very close! try this
"this moment, I am going for a stroll in a nearby park. I like strolling in the park. there a great number of lovely birds. When I finish my stroll, I often sit on a bench to view the lovely birds.
(this sounds formal, not as many natives would say casually)
- Vereinfachtes Chinesisch (China)
- Englisch (US)

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