Please help me! This is an urgent question. Could you please correct it to sound natural?''Here is an example story that I want to tell you. I run across this story in my friend's conversation that she made me very angry the other day. She has two-faces speaking between on the net and on the phone with me. I wanted to present how contradiction there were and show my feelings in my writing, however my writing was very ambiguous sounding and
was said that it's hard to get across from native speaker's perspective.

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Elliew

8 Mai 2016

Englisch (US)

This is a story i want to tell you.I came across this the other day when my friend was having a conversation that made me very angry. The way she speaks when shes on the internet as opposed to when shes on the phone is like listening to two different people.

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rheaxtina

8 Mai 2016

Englisch (US)

The other day, I heard a story about what my friend said about me that made me very upset. She was nice to me over the phone, but talked behind my back on the internet.

Is this the message you're trying to get across?

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Kmarilyn

8 Mai 2016

Japanisch

Thank you very much for your anwers. Please let me add some words to explain. My friend always 100％ says exitedly that she wants go out with me to feel fresh and relax over the phone. However what she commented to me when I shared an interesting Sake bar
on Facebook, she commeted me such a cotradictionary comment. I thought how dare could she say that?

Kmarilyn

8 Mai 2016

Japanisch

@rheaxtina: Please read my story in details. I'm sorry that I sound very vague... I was very upset my friend that has two faces. She is phony.

Kmarilyn

8 Mai 2016

Japanisch

@Elliew: Thank you very much for understanding my English. I'm sure there're a lot of things that I can fully get across but I wrote all my best who I can be.