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Mobile phones advantages and disadvantages.

There was a time when peagons used to be a source of sending messages. Then we developed the way of communication and letter was introduced which is delivered by post man and used to take a week. Today we have been living in scientific and technology era where human have become slave of machine and most of the thing is done technically within a minute. In the 19th era, mobile phones was introduced and have become necessary part of human being like bread and shelter. There a lot of benefits of mobile phones. Mobile phones have removed the distance of communication, people from any country can get in touch with their friends and family, people can listen music, play games and surf Internet. There are many functions in the phones, you can see time table, calendar, map and can download applications to book the tickets of train, plain and movie so it has reduced the time where you have to stand in queue for an hour to book ticket or appointment of, you can do it via online via mobile phones within a minute.

Despite of numerous advantages it has disadvantages as well.
People gets addicted of using mobile phones which kill their precious time of study and work. Radios of mobile is very harmful for eyes and human body. Using mobile phones in early age affect to study as there are many social sites where people waste their maximum time and forget eating, studying and sleeping. However, we can't deny the fact as mobile phones have become most neces

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Cricket is one of the most popular game in India where cricketers are worshipped like hero. They earn name, fame and wealth in short span of time because of their splendid performance in early matches. People of India are crazy about cricket and never miss the match specially played between India and Pakistan.

I had a chance to watch India and Pakistan T-20 final in Kolkata. It was thrilling match and the stadium was full of their capacity. Both the country's audiences were enjoying and encouraging their country. Whole atmosphere of the ground was full of ambiance. Spectators were bearing colourful favourite team T-shirts, painted their checks in Tri-colour and holded quotation board for boundaries, they were shouting to cheer their favourite players and team.

Before start the game, both the captain came to toss, India won the toss and decided to bat. Openers gave great start to the team but later on India started losing wickets. Gambhir was the man who stayed long on the pitch and finished with respected total of 176. Pakistan start wasn't well and they lost their 3 wickets early. Then Shoaib Malik started hitting the ball with Misbah who was the captain of Pakistan and alive the win of Pakistan. The most interesting moment of the match was last over where Pakistan need 4 runs in 3 balls and one wicket was remaining. Misbah played wrong shot and caught by the fielder. Then Indian team celebration started as India had become champion of T-20 first time. So I enjoyed a lot final match and went back to home with hilling memory.