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This captures the people’s life priority where a home being the first rather than wellbeing or health. This can be marked as problematic since house expenditure is usually required to pay before other material living standards. This indicates that it makes more difficult for people to afford other necessities. klingt das natürlich?
This captures the people’s life priority where a home being the first rather than wellbeing or health. This can be marked as problematic since house expenditure is usually required to pay before other material living standards. This indicates that it makes more difficult for people to afford other necessities. klingt das natürlich?
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@naa I didn't notice, so it must be OK.
I missed a word in the last sentence here. Here's a correction and an alternative for you...
This reflects householders' life priorities, where a home comes first rather than wellbeing or health, which can be problematic since housing expenditure is usually required to be paid before other material living costs. This suggests that it makes it more difficult for people to afford other necessities.
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@naa Almost...
This reflects householders' life priorities where a home comes first rather than wellbeing or health. This can be problematic since housing expenditure is usually required to be paid before other material living costs. This indicates that it makes more difficult for people to afford other necessities.
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@Igirisujin: Do you think it's ok to repeat the sentences with "this" at the beginning? haha
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@naa I didn't notice, so it must be OK.
I missed a word in the last sentence here. Here's a correction and an alternative for you...
This reflects householders' life priorities, where a home comes first rather than wellbeing or health, which can be problematic since housing expenditure is usually required to be paid before other material living costs. This suggests that it makes it more difficult for people to afford other necessities.
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@Igirisujin: Ah hello Igirisujinsan! I didn't expect to get reply from you at this time haha😆😆
Thank you for the alternative ! 😊
Thank you for the alternative ! 😊
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