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We had the CPR / First Aid training at the office. Every employee is now ready to handle different kinds of emergency situation. That was the first time for me to see an AED and demonstrate it. I learned that AED should be used only in case someone lose conscious, breathing and heart beating. When I was in Japan, there was a criticism towards school teacher who didn’t use AED because the student had conscious, breathing and heart beating. AED in Japan might have a function to diagnose the necessity of electrical shock, according to the instructor of our CPR class. However, I though it is too difficult to catch up with the latest technology and fully utilize it. klingt das natürlich?
We had the CPR / First Aid training at the office. Every employee is now ready to handle different kinds of emergency situation. That was the first time for me to see an AED and demonstrate it. I learned that AED should be used only in case someone lose conscious, breathing and heart beating. When I was in Japan, there was a criticism towards school teacher who didn’t use AED because the student had conscious, breathing and heart beating. AED in Japan might have a function to diagnose the necessity of electrical shock, according to the instructor of our CPR class. However, I though it is too difficult to catch up with the latest technology and fully utilize it. klingt das natürlich?
Please revise it if it is not natural.
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'We had the CPR / First Aid training at the office. Every employee is now ready to handle different kinds of emergency situations. That was the first time for me to see an AED and demonstrate it. I learned that AED should be used only in the case that someone loses consciousness, breathing, and heartbeat. When I was in Japan, there was criticism towards a school teacher who didn’t use an AED because the student had consciousness, breathing, and a heartbeat. An AED in Japan might have a function to diagnose the necessity of electrical shock, according to the instructor of our CPR class. However, I though it is too difficult to catch up with the latest technology and fully utilize it.'
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Very good draft!
'We had the CPR / First Aid training at the office. Every employee is now ready to handle different kinds of emergency situations. That was the first time for me to see an AED and demonstrate it. I learned that AED should be used only in the case that someone loses consciousness, breathing, and heartbeat. When I was in Japan, there was criticism towards a school teacher who didn’t use an AED because the student had consciousness, breathing, and a heartbeat. An AED in Japan might have a function to diagnose the necessity of electrical shock, according to the instructor of our CPR class. However, I though it is too difficult to catch up with the latest technology and fully utilize it.'
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@CFarr Thank you! I realized there are so many grammatical errors... I will study hard!
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@Ace111 grammar is a hard thing! You’re doing well so far :)
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