'What's better: the civilization or primitive?'

How much is the civilization?Some people claim that the civilization is miracle, while others argue that it is a killer if nature.What is better: the civilization or the primitive state?In this essay I would like to express my point of view on this issue.

I certain that the civilization is the best way for humanity.To begin with, the civilization is more comfortable because people don't have to hunt, build a fire and protect themselves from wild animals.Moreover, the civilization lets people to develop science, so the border of the development disapears.

Others believe that the civilization separated people from nature.

I am afraid I can't agree with this opinion because there are many national parks and forests separeted from the civilization where people can unite with nature.

In conclusion, I want to say that despite the fact that some people argue that the civilization is not a good way, I am convinced that the civilization is better than the primitive


Could you comment my mistakes?
Plese write if stucture of this text needs an upgrade.
If you don't agree with my opinion, write about it below, please.

"What's better: the civilization or primitive?"
This doesn't make sense. I'd say something like "what's better: living in a civilization or living primitively?"

"How much is the civilization?"
Doesn't make sense again. I'd say something like "is civilization good?" or "how good is civilization?".

"... the civilization is miracle"
Should be "civilization is a miracle".

"... killer if nature"
Should be "killer of nature".

"What is better: the civilization or primitive state?"
Again, I wouldn't use "the" there. Just "what is better: (living in a) civilization or (living in a) primitive state?".

"...I certain that"
Should be "I am certain that".

"... the civilization is more comfortable"
Just "civilization". The world civilization shouldn't have a "the" before it, so this kind of applies to the whole of the text. Also, I'm not too sure if "civilization" is really the word to go to when you're using it like this, I'd say maybe "civilized society" is better, but I'll still just stick with "civilization" in my corrections.

"... lets people to develop science"
"lets people develop science" would be more correct, but I wouldn't use that phrasing at all. I'd say "civilization allows for scientific progress" or "civilization lets people develop a better understanding of science" or something like that.

"... so the border of the development disapears"
I'm not really sure what you're trying to say here.

"disapears"
Should be "disappears".

"... that the civilization separated people from nature"
I'd say "civilization separates people from nature" but what you said isn't wrong.

"... forests separeted"
Should be "separated".

"... where people can unite with nature"
Not really wrong, but I'd say "where people can be one with nature" instead.

"... that the civilization is not a good way"
Something like "that civilization is not a good thing" would be better.

"... that the civilization is better than the primitive".
Something like "living primitively" would probably go better here.

My corrections probably aren't perfect but hopefully I've managed to help somehow.