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I wrote a introductory paragraph. If I mistake something, please fix them. Thank you.
Recently, I often hear and read articles about people change food to eat for some advantages. Your body is made by food that you eat, so if you care about your health, you would eat food which is not bad for health. On the other hand, people who aren't concerned about their health eat everything that they want to eat. In consequence, their body could break and get disease like lifestyles diseases. I know It's difficult to save to eat food that you want. However, a lot of people hope to live a long life. That's why now some people switch food to eat. The reason that people become vegetarians is mostly for health. In contrast, there are also some different reasons why people should be vegetarians.
I wrote a introductory paragraph. If I mistake something, please fix them. Thank you.
Recently, I often hear and read articles about people change food to eat for some advantages. Your body is made by food that you eat, so if you care about your health, you would eat food which is not bad for health. On the other hand, people who aren't concerned about their health eat everything that they want to eat. In consequence, their body could break and get disease like lifestyles diseases. I know It's difficult to save to eat food that you want. However, a lot of people hope to live a long life. That's why now some people switch food to eat. The reason that people become vegetarians is mostly for health. In contrast, there are also some different reasons why people should be vegetarians.
Recently, I often hear and read articles about people change food to eat for some advantages. Your body is made by food that you eat, so if you care about your health, you would eat food which is not bad for health. On the other hand, people who aren't concerned about their health eat everything that they want to eat. In consequence, their body could break and get disease like lifestyles diseases. I know It's difficult to save to eat food that you want. However, a lot of people hope to live a long life. That's why now some people switch food to eat. The reason that people become vegetarians is mostly for health. In contrast, there are also some different reasons why people should be vegetarians.
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Yes, the word 'food' is a count noun. However, the word is a bit weird because we technically don't have to say 'foods' when talking about more than one food item. In the first sentence, both "food" and "foods" work.
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