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I write a resume to change my job. I really need your help !
Work Experience
XXX XXX CO.,LTD (Tokyo, Japan)
Grand Agent , April 2015 - Present
・3 years' experience in HOSPITALITY STRATEGY in airline industry
・Train new employees at ckeck-in counter and boarding gate
・Team endeavor: aim to be the world's best airline
・Involve everyone in the office for on time departure (Contributed to on-time arrival rate)
・Native Japanese, Business level English communication skill: TOEIC score 600 klingt das natürlich?
I write a resume to change my job. I really need your help !
Work Experience
XXX XXX CO.,LTD (Tokyo, Japan)
Grand Agent , April 2015 - Present
・3 years' experience in HOSPITALITY STRATEGY in airline industry
・Train new employees at ckeck-in counter and boarding gate
・Team endeavor: aim to be the world's best airline
・Involve everyone in the office for on time departure (Contributed to on-time arrival rate)
・Native Japanese, Business level English communication skill: TOEIC score 600 klingt das natürlich?
Work Experience
XXX XXX CO.,LTD (Tokyo, Japan)
Grand Agent , April 2015 - Present
・3 years' experience in HOSPITALITY STRATEGY in airline industry
・Train new employees at ckeck-in counter and boarding gate
・Team endeavor: aim to be the world's best airline
・Involve everyone in the office for on time departure (Contributed to on-time arrival rate)
・Native Japanese, Business level English communication skill: TOEIC score 600 klingt das natürlich?
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5 Nov 2017
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make sure to correct ckeck to check-in counter
I would move the team endeavor above your years of experience because then it would seem like what you did at the company contributed toward that.
If you are actually looking for a new job then I have some tips below to help your resume be stronger.
when you say involve everyone in the office, be a little more specific about how you involved them. (created an ad-hoc group to strategize how we could improve, etc.)
and also how you contributed to a higher on-time arrival date.
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make sure to correct ckeck to check-in counter
I would move the team endeavor above your years of experience because then it would seem like what you did at the company contributed toward that.
If you are actually looking for a new job then I have some tips below to help your resume be stronger.
when you say involve everyone in the office, be a little more specific about how you involved them. (created an ad-hoc group to strategize how we could improve, etc.)
and also how you contributed to a higher on-time arrival date.
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Work Experience
XXX XXX CO., LTD (Tokyo, Japan)
Grand Agent, April 2015 - now
· 3 years work experience in HOSPITALITY WORK STRATEGY in aviation industry.
Train new employees at ckeck-in counter and boarding counters
· Team strives: aims to be the world's best airline
· Involve everyone in the office to dispatch the flight on time (Contribute to timely arrival rate)
· Original Japanese language, Business level of English communication skills: TOEIC score 600.
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@urmomsayswut Thank you very much for your help. I will correct these sentences.
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@inayatul763 Thank you very much for your help. I will correct these sentences.
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