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"Computer games, as we know, are mostly harmful for children by various consequences. First of all, this type of entertainment is highly addictive, especially with children. Furthermore, the children is probably becoming violent due to an influence of several respective computer games" klingt das natürlich?
"Computer games, as we know, are mostly harmful for children by various consequences. First of all, this type of entertainment is highly addictive, especially with children. Furthermore, the children is probably becoming violent due to an influence of several respective computer games" klingt das natürlich?
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- Englisch (US)
Etwas unnatürlich
Computer games are, as we know, very harmful to children for various reasons. First of all, this type of entertainment is highly addictive, especially for children (instead you could say "for the youth" to avoid repetition. Furthermore, the children are probably becoming violent due to an influence of several respective computer games.
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- Englisch (US)
Etwas unnatürlich
Computer games are, as we know, very harmful to children for various reasons. First of all, this type of entertainment is highly addictive, especially for children (instead you could say "for the youth" to avoid repetition. Furthermore, the children are probably becoming violent due to an influence of several respective computer games.
- Spanisch (Mexiko)
@Peaches4Him OMG how kind you are, but how can you notice my old question as it's already been embeded?
- Englisch (US)
Etwas unnatürlich
It looks like you're writing a paper and I was curious about the rest of your research, so I looked at previous questions you had posted.
I'm sorry if that seems creepy! hahaha
- Spanisch (Mexiko)
@Peaches4Him haha it's not creepy at all man. I found it helpful and kind instead. thank you.
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