I made this script for my homework. If there are akward expresion, wrong grammer things, unnatural sentence or somthing, please correcting them. My professor is American. So if there are some expression that makes my conversation looks more Americanish, please add them too. Thanks!!

Unit.6
A : You know what, I got a weird dream last night.
B : What kind of dream was it?
A : When I’m dreaming I am aware it’s a dream. And I can control
whole stream of dream, so I can fly in there. You know what I mean?
B : Oh, isnt’ it lucid dream? I heard of it but I didn’t believe. Is it possible? It’s
so amazing!
A : Neither did I! I also not believe it! But it's real!
B : Can you tell me more about that?
A : Apparently, if you want to get lucid dream, lying in the bed and do
autosuggestion continually before fall into the dream.
B : Is that all?
A : You know, If you try it repeatedly, someday you will have it.
B : Wow i'll try it someday.
A : I hope you to success! So, have you ever got some weird dream like me?
B : Yes! I had a strange dream when I was 19 years old. I saw groups of dolphins.
One of them swam around me and I touched her, and She smiled at me.
A : What a beautiful dream! Did you search some dream reading about dolphin?
B : Of course! Surprisingly, the dolphin dream means lucky, success or something
like that! You know what happened? I got an acceptance notice from the
university where I wanted to enter after having that dream. So here I am!
A : Wow what a wonderful story! I want to dream something lucky like you!

Unit.10
A : Hey! Have you ever heard about Han Hyun-min?
B : I heard of him but I don’t know exactly who he is. I only know just his name.
A : You know, he is an up-and-coming star. He is a teen male model.
B : Really? I don't know much about him. Can you tell me more?
A : Yes. In 2016 Seoul Fashion Week, he got the first show. After debut, He
has began to draw attention from the public and makes headlines.
B : Let me search. … I just found an interesting article about him. He is one of
the most influential teenagers in 2017 by Time magazine. It's amazing! …
Oh, he has an exotic appearance.
A: Yeah. You know, he has more darker skin than other koreans because of his
Nigerian father. And his mother is Korean.
B: Ah, I see!
A: I read some interview about him before. Evidently, he was alienated because of
his skin color when he was young. Even someone said, “Don't play with him
everyone. If you play with him, you will become darker too."
B: They should't be said that! I mean, that's too cruel to little boy. I think it was
very hard time for him.
A : Yeah, that's what i'm saying.
B : But, if he just frustrated and hadn't tried anything, he might not have had
the chance to become a star. Despite all negative conditions, he made it, didn't
he?
A: Yes, he did. I really admire his effort. klingt das natürlich?

Question

I made this script for my homework. If there are akward expresion, wrong grammer things, unnatural sentence or somthing, please correcting them. My professor is American. So if there are some expression that makes my conversation looks more Americanish, please add them too. Thanks!!

Unit.6
A : You know what, I got a weird dream last night.
B : What kind of dream was it?
A : When I’m dreaming I am aware it’s a dream. And I can control
   whole stream of dream, so I can fly in there. You know what I mean?  
B : Oh, isnt’ it lucid dream? I heard of it but I didn’t believe. Is it possible? It’s
    so amazing!
A : Neither did I! I also not believe it! But it's real! 
B : Can you tell me more about that?
A : Apparently, if you want to get lucid dream, lying in the bed and do
   autosuggestion continually before fall into the dream. 
B : Is that all?
A : You know, If you try it repeatedly, someday you will have it.
B : Wow i'll try it someday.
A : I hope you to success! So, have you ever got some weird dream like me?
B : Yes! I had a strange dream when I was 19 years old. I saw groups of dolphins. 
   One of them swam around me and I touched her, and She smiled at me.
A : What a beautiful dream! Did you search some dream reading about dolphin?
B : Of course! Surprisingly, the dolphin dream means lucky, success or something
   like that! You know what happened? I got an acceptance notice from the 
   university where I wanted to enter after having that dream. So here I am!
A : Wow what a wonderful story! I want to dream something lucky like you!

Unit.10
A : Hey! Have you ever heard about Han Hyun-min?
B : I heard of him but I don’t know exactly who he is. I only know just his name.
A : You know, he is an up-and-coming star. He is a teen male model. 
B : Really? I don't know much about him. Can you tell me more? 
A : Yes. In 2016 Seoul Fashion Week, he got the first show. After debut, He 
    has began to draw attention from the public and makes headlines. 
B : Let me search. … I just found an interesting article about him. He is one of
   the most influential teenagers in 2017 by Time magazine. It's amazing! … 
   Oh, he has an exotic appearance. 
A: Yeah. You know, he has more darker skin than other koreans because of his
   Nigerian father. And his mother is Korean.
B: Ah, I see!
A: I read some interview about him before. Evidently, he was alienated because of
   his skin color when he was young. Even someone said, “Don't play with him
   everyone. If you play with him, you will become darker too."
B: They should't be said that! I mean, that's too cruel to little boy.  I think it was
   very hard time for him.
A : Yeah, that's what i'm saying.
B : But, if he just frustrated and hadn't tried anything, he might not have had 
   the chance to become a star. Despite all negative conditions, he made it, didn't
   he?
A: Yes, he did. I really admire his effort. klingt das natürlich?

urmomsayswut · Accepted Answer

A : I had a weird dream last night.
B : What kind of dream?
A : Well, I was aware that I was in a dream. And I could control the dream, so I was flying in it. You know what I mean?  
B : Oh, I think that's a lucid dream? I had heard of it before but I didn’t believe it was real. If it is possible, It’s so amazing!
A : Neither did I! I also didn't believe it, but I now know that it's real! 
B : How do you do it though?
A : Apparently, if you want to have a lucid dream, you should lie in bed and autosuggest continually before falling into the dream. 
B : Is that all?
A : I guess If you try it repeatedly, someday you will have it.
B : Wow I'll try it someday.
A : Good luck! Have you ever had a weird dream?
B : Yes! I had a strange dream when I was 19. I saw a pod of dolphins. One of them swam around me so I touched her and she smiled at me.
A : What a beautiful dream! Did you find out what a dolphin means in a dream?
B : Of course! Surprisingly, dreaming about dolphins is a sign of luck, success or something like that! You know what happened next? I got an accepted to my first choice university and here I am!
A : Wow, what a wonderful story! I want to dream something lucky like you!

Unit.10
A : Hey! Have you ever heard about Han Hyun-min?
B : I heard of him but I don’t know exactly who he is. I only know his name.
A : You know, he is an up-and-coming star. He is a teen model. 
B : Really? I don't know much about him.
A : 2016 Seoul Fashion Week was his first show. After his debut, he began to gain notoriety and made headlines. 
B : Let me Google him. … I just found an interesting article about him. He is one of the most influential teenagers in 2017 in Time Magazine. That's amazing! Oh, he has an exotic look.
A: Yeah. You know, he has darker skin than other koreans because of his parents. His father is Nigerian and his mother is Korean.
B: Ah, I see!
A: I've read some interviews about him before. Evidently, he was alienated because of his skin color when he was young. Someone even said, “Don't play with him everyone. If you play with him, you will become darker too."
B: They should't have said that! I mean, that's too cruel to a little boy.  That must have been a very hard time for him.
A : Yeah, that's what i'm saying.
B : But if he had listened to them and never embraced his look, he may never have become a star. Despite all negative conditions, he made it, didn't he?
A: Yes, he did. I really admire his effort.

CallmeKitty · Answer

It's just small things
A) You know what, I had a weird dream last night.
When I'm dreaming I'm aware that it's a dream. I can control it, I can even fly there. You know what I mean?
B) Oh, isn't that called lucid dreaming? I've heard of it but I don't believe in it. is it even possible? 
A) I didn't believe it either! But it's real!
B) Can you tell me more about it?
A)Apparently if you want to lucid dream you have to lay in bed and do autosuggestion until you talk asleep. 
A) If you try it repeatedly you'll get it. 
A) I hope you succeed! Have you ever had a weird dream?
B) Yes! I had a strange dream when I was 19. I saw a group of dolphins. One of them swam around me and I touched her and she smiled at me.
A) What a beautiful dream! Did you look up what dolphins in your dreams could mean?
B) Of course! Surprisingly seeing Dolphins in your dreams is a lucky sign! You know what happened after I had that dream? I got an acceptance notice from the university I wanted to get into. And here I am!
A)wow what a wonderful story! I want to dream of something lucky to!
UNIT 10
A) Hey, have you heard about Han Hyun-min?
B) I heard of him but I din5 know exactly who he is. I only know his name.
A) Yes. He debuted in Seoul's Fashion week in 2016. After his debute he started attracting A lot of attention and making headlines. 
A)Yeah, he's darker than other Koreans, because his father is Nigerian, but his mother is Korean.
A) I read an interview about him before.
B)They shouldn't say that! That's cruel to say to a little kid. it must've been very hard on him. 
B) But, if he had just gotten angry and hadn't tried to do anything about it he might not have had this chance. Despite all the negative things he did it didn't he. 
I only fixed the ones I thought could use it other wise it's all very very good. And I've heard of that model! he's so inspiring I wish I could do something like that to!

urmomsayswut · Answer

it can be used both ways. notorious is usually bad, like infamous but notoriety is neutral.

Jessica13j · Answer

Unit.6
A : You know what, I had a weird dream last night.
B : What kind of dream was it?
A : When I’m dreaming I am aware it’s a dream. And I can control
 What happens in the dream, so I can fly in there. You know what I mean?  
B : Oh, is it a lucid dream? I have heard of it but I didn’t believe in it. Is it possible? It’s
    so amazing!
A : Neither did I! I also not believe it! But it's real! 
B : Can you tell me more about that?
A : Apparently, if you want to have a lucid dream, while lying in bed and do
   autosuggestion continually before fall into the dream. 
B : Is that all?
A : You know, If you try it repeatedly, someday you will have it.
B : Wow i'll try it someday.
A : I hope you have success! So, have you ever had a weird dream like me?
B : Yes! I had a strange dream when I was 19 years old. I saw groups of dolphins. 
   One of them swam around me and I touched her, and She smiled at me.
A : What a beautiful dream! Did you search some dream interpretations about dolphins?
B : Of course! Surprisingly, the dolphin dream means lucky, success or something
   like that! You know what happened? I got an acceptance notice from the 
   university where I wanted to enter after having that dream. So here I am!
A : Wow what a wonderful story! I want to dream something lucky like you!

Unit.10
A : Hey! Have you ever heard about Han Hyun-min?
B : I heard of him but I don’t know exactly who he is. I only know just his name.
A : You know, he is an up-and-coming star. He is a teen male model. 
B : Really? I don't know much about him. Can you tell me more? 
A : Yes. In 2016 Seoul Fashion Week, he got the first show. After his debut, He 
  began to draw attention from the public and started making headlines. 
B : Let me search. … I just found an interesting article about him. He is one of
   the most influential teenagers in 2017 by Time magazine. It's amazing! … 
   Oh, he has an exotic appearance. 
A: Yeah. You know, he has more darker skin than other koreans because of his
   Nigerian father. And his mother is Korean.
B: Ah, I see!
A: I read an interview about him before. Evidently, he was alienated because of
   his skin color when he was young. someone said, “Don't play with him. If you play with him, you will become darker too."
B: They should't have said that! I mean, that's too cruel to little boy.  I think it was a
   very hard time for him.
A : Yeah, that's what i'm saying.
B : But, if he just became frustrated and hadn't tried anything, he might not have had 
   the chance to become a star. Despite all negative conditions, he made it, didn't
   he?
A: Yes, he did. I really admire his effort. does this sound natural?

it can be used both ways. notorious is usually bad, like infamous but notoriety is neutral.

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