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29 Apr 2018

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I am writing my CV and have difficulty of filling ’my interests’ space.

I wanna use these these sentence below included but I'm not sure wheter I can write these things on CV? Isn't it polite?

I am a member of a baseball team. I started playing baseball when I was in elementary school, and continued to play it for over 15 years

My hobby today is to appreciate pictures. I prefer to the works by impressionist painters, especially by Monet. I wanna visit art museums all over the world.

My favorit genre of book is mystery especially written by Dan Brown who wrote 'The Da Vinci Code', 'Angels and Demos' and all that.

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29 Apr 2018

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“Wanna” is slang, so definitely don’t use that. Here is my correction:

I am a member of a baseball team. I started playing baseball when I was in primary school, and continued to play it for over 15 years.

Nowadays, my hobby is art and appreciating the many beautiful pictures created by different artists. I prefer works by impressionist painters, especially Monet. I would like to visit art museums all over the world.

My favourite book genre is mystery- especially those written by Dan Brown, such as 'The Da Vinci Code' and ‘Angels and Demos', among many others.

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I appreciate it!

thank you so much

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