Mother's is coming, so I want to write a letter to my mommy(in English). Hope there somebody can help me to check whether the grammar or words was wrong. Thank you guys.

What an honorable thing that I'm your daughter! Happy Mother's Day! You are not only my friend but also my life teacher. Thank you for listening to all of my depressing secrets, and you always give me awesome advices and feedback to solve the problems. Even if you were tried when you came off duty, you still listened to my problems and being my trash can. I extremely appreciate all the things that you’ve done for me. Besides, I'm so proud of that I have such a great mommy, beautiful, wise, elegant and omnipotent just like Wonder Woman in the movie. Maybe I saved the Galaxy in the past life, so I can become your daughter now. Mom, I still want to be your daughter in the next life! Being your daughter is the most lucky thing in the world. You are the best mom ever!

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Mother's is coming, so I want to write a letter to my mommy(in English). Hope there somebody can help me to check whether the grammar or words was wrong. Thank you guys.

What an honorable thing that I'm your daughter! Happy Mother's Day! You are not only my friend but also my life teacher. Thank you for listening to all of my depressing secrets, and you always give me awesome advices and feedback to solve the problems. Even if you were tried when you came off duty, you still listened to my problems and  being my trash can. I extremely appreciate all the things that you’ve done for me. Besides, I'm so proud of that I have such a great mommy, beautiful, wise, elegant and omnipotent just like Wonder Woman in the movie. Maybe I saved the Galaxy in the past life, so I can become your daughter now. Mom, I still want to be your daughter in the next life! Being your daughter is the most lucky thing in the world. You are the best mom ever!

HeroNo13 · Answer

"I feel very honored to be your daughter! Happy Mother's Day! You are not only my friend, but also my life-long teacher. Thank you for listening to all of my depressing secrets, and always giving me awesome advice and feedback to solve my problems. Even if you were tired when you came back home, you still listened to my problems. I really appreciate everything that you've done for me. I'm so proud that I have such a great mommy who is beautiful, wise, elegnlant, and omnipotent just like Wonder Woman from the movie. Maybe I saved the Galaxy in a past life, so I can become your daughter now. (or you could say "and that is why I am your daughter now." It sounds slightly better, but also changes the meaning of the sentence.) Mom, I still want to be your daughter in the next life. Being your daughter is the luckiest thing in the world that has ever happened to me. You are the best mom ever!"

japanisadream · Answer

It's very good

StrangeScribble · Answer

(Dear Mom,)
What a (honor it is to be your) daughter! Happy Mother's Day! You are not only my friend, but also my life teacher. Thank you for listening to all of my depressing secrets, and always (giving) me awesome (advice) and feedback to solve (my) problems. Even if you were ( tired) when you (were) off duty, you still listened to my problems. I appreciate all the things that ( you have ) done for me. I'm so proud that I have such a great ( mom). (You are ) beautiful, wise, elegant, and omnipotent just like Wonder Woman. Maybe I saved the Galaxy in ( a) past life, so I( could) become your daughter. Mom, I still want to be your daughter in the next life! Being your daughter is the ( best) thing in the world. You are the best mom ever! 
- Love (your name).

The parentheses are what i fixed or added. I hoped this helps. I hope your mother likes it.

It's very good

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